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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Motivational letter

Hey. I have written a motivational letter can you please point out mistakes ?
To
Admission Department
University of ___________

Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to apply for Bachelor's Degree Programme in _______. I have decided to apply for this programme because I am sure it would strongly enrich my future studies and help me in my prospective career. Moreover I consider this programme as a great opportunity to get in touch with Finnish culture and educational system. I believe that Finland is a perfect country for study with wide range of options and good standards. Also this is a perfect opportunity for me to secure my future.
I have chosen to apply for University of ______, because I really like its module system of study. I specially appreciate the wide range of offered modules and the freedom in making your study plan. Many of the modules offered are unique for me, because there is no equivalent at my home university. Excellent rating in teaching and friendly atmosphere at both the university as well as the city is also a reason for me to apply here.
During my prior studies I have found out, that I would like to so Bachelor in ______ and University of _____ gives me the best chance to do that. I have studied Pre-Engineering in my prior studies. So these are the best fields for me to specialize in. I am highly motivated because _____ field has no boundaries. I will work hard for my goals and aspirations.
Obtaining a degree from ______ would be an honor if given a chance, I will do my best to succeed. I do not expect this to be easy, on the contrary, I think it will be really challenging and I am extremely excited about thing waiting for me in the future.
Thank you very much for considering my request. I am looking forward to the opportunity to study at your university and to making a great contribution to your community.

Yours faithfully
  
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