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Mariella Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivational letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
Please help me to correct or change the paragraph in bold (reasons why I want to study at this uni). Thank you!!!!
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I want to apply to your MSc International Tourism Management programme starting in X.
I attended Tourism and Catering high school X, the most renowned X school in the field of tourism and hospitality. During the four-year programme I had performed to an exceptional standard and achieved a final exam exemption certificate. Upon graduation, I was awarded the position of a seasonal receptionist in a hotel by demonstrating enthusiasm and competency to communicate effectively in English, French, Italian and Spanish. While working the front desk, I learned how to handle difficult situations with a positive attitude. Throughout my academic career, I accomplished the goals I had set for myself.
In 2011, I earned a Bachelor Degree in French language and Literature from Faculty of Philosophy in X and was honoured to be one of two students in my department who won the Excellent Bachelor Thesis. During my studies, I was among the top two students in my classes and was elected the president of my class for three consecutive years. These experiences allowed me to develop my leadership and organizational skills.
My passion for travelling and exceeding tourist expectations while managing our guest houses motivated me to pursue my studies in tourism industry. I find meeting new people and becoming acquainted with their cultures personally and professionally rewarding.
Similarly, having an opportunity to interact with students from around the world is one of the reasons why I want to study at your university. In addition, its reputation in tourism education and the opportunity to acquire high-quality knowledge is the greatest motivation for me. (should I add more reasons?)
Because I am a dynamic, ambitious and highly motivated student with a strong record of success, I am confident that I will exceed your expectations. Furthermore, my varied and rich background will add diversity to your programme.
Thank you for your consideration, and I look forward to your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Please help me to correct or change the paragraph in bold (reasons why I want to study at this uni). Thank you!!!!
)Dear Sir or Madam,
I want to apply to your MSc International Tourism Management programme starting in X.
I attended Tourism and Catering high school X, the most renowned X school in the field of tourism and hospitality. During the four-year programme I had performed to an exceptional standard and achieved a final exam exemption certificate. Upon graduation, I was awarded the position of a seasonal receptionist in a hotel by demonstrating enthusiasm and competency to communicate effectively in English, French, Italian and Spanish. While working the front desk, I learned how to handle difficult situations with a positive attitude. Throughout my academic career, I accomplished the goals I had set for myself.
In 2011, I earned a Bachelor Degree in French language and Literature from Faculty of Philosophy in X and was honoured to be one of two students in my department who won the Excellent Bachelor Thesis. During my studies, I was among the top two students in my classes and was elected the president of my class for three consecutive years. These experiences allowed me to develop my leadership and organizational skills.
My passion for travelling and exceeding tourist expectations while managing our guest houses motivated me to pursue my studies in tourism industry. I find meeting new people and becoming acquainted with their cultures personally and professionally rewarding.
Similarly, having an opportunity to interact with students from around the world is one of the reasons why I want to study at your university. In addition, its reputation in tourism education and the opportunity to acquire high-quality knowledge is the greatest motivation for me. (should I add more reasons?)
Because I am a dynamic, ambitious and highly motivated student with a strong record of success, I am confident that I will exceed your expectations. Furthermore, my varied and rich background will add diversity to your programme.
Thank you for your consideration, and I look forward to your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
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