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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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motivation letter..suggestions required
I need to write a motivation letter to restart my studies in the university again. I have written only the beginning yet. I want to know if it is correct or should I improve it?
here it is
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Dear Madam/Sir,
I am writing to apply to restart the Bachelor’s programme in International Business Administration.
After completing my graduation from XXX I had joined XXX University In the academic year 2002-2003. At the end of the year I have got binding study advice because I didn’t get sufficient credits to pass first year. I had got only XX credits. I could not apply for the same course for three years. It’s been three years now and I want to continue my studies again.
Last year I sent a request to the Examination Board for exemption for one year. But I didn’t get positive response from MR. XXX. The argument that he gave was ‘My poor result in the past’. I do know why I got out of the university. With due respect I would like to say if I had obtained sufficient credits in past. I would have continued my studies. …..
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I kindly seek your comments..Thanks in advance
here it is
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Dear Madam/Sir,
I am writing to apply to restart the Bachelor’s programme in International Business Administration.
After completing my graduation from XXX I had joined XXX University In the academic year 2002-2003. At the end of the year I have got binding study advice because I didn’t get sufficient credits to pass first year. I had got only XX credits. I could not apply for the same course for three years. It’s been three years now and I want to continue my studies again.
Last year I sent a request to the Examination Board for exemption for one year. But I didn’t get positive response from MR. XXX. The argument that he gave was ‘My poor result in the past’. I do know why I got out of the university. With due respect I would like to say if I had obtained sufficient credits in past. I would have continued my studies. …..
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I kindly seek your comments..Thanks in advance
Top answer
2nd part is... *** I am highly motivated to continue my studies again as I believe if I get another opportunity I wont let it go this time. During my studies at *** University.
- 2nd part is...
- *** I am highly motivated to continue my studies again as I believe if I get another opportunity I wont let it go this time.
- During my studies at *** University.
- I had faced some common problems such as lack of knowledge about computer, the difference between examination system between *** and *** and so on.
- I found even the very easiest subject Skills Training a lot difficult as at that time I found making assignments and preparing for presentations very time consuming.
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2nd part is...
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I am highly motivated to continue my studies again as I believe if I get another opportunity I wont let it go this time. During my studies at *** University. I had faced some common problems such as lack of knowledge about computer, the difference between examination system between *** and *** and so on. I found even the very easiest subject Skills Training a l
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I am highly motivated to continue my studies again as I believe if I get another opportunity I wont let it go this time. During my studies at *** University. I had faced some common problems such as lack of knowledge about computer, the difference between examination system between *** and *** and so on. I found even the very easiest subject Skills Training a l
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