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Ematisko Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivation Letter/Purpose of study-Applying scholarship.Deadline-in 4days:(
Hello guys! All these topics here were very useful for me and helped a lot. I wrote some kind of motivation letter. It's to fill a field called "Purpose of Study" in some applicaation form of scholarship for bachelors degree. I'm not sure if it's necessery to write official header and footer for it, because there's just 5-6 lines to fill. So here my letter goes...Please guys help me correcting it, it' too important and deadline is in 4 days
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”The best way to imagine your future is to create it” goes the adage.
I have been intresting in medicine since last years of my high school studies when I won various olimpiads in chemistry and biology. These experiences helped me to discover how challenging is to be perfectionist. In 2004 I entered dentistry faculty of Tbilisi State Medical University which is one of the most respectable medical schools of Georgia. Gaining a strong theoretical background in dentistry I was given opportunity to experience clinical work in University of Hacettepe, Dentistry faculty, Ankara, Turkey in 30 July-30 August, 2006, where I became fascinated with my future profession and recognized that my dream to became a professional dentist is not a madness but not a reality yet.
I think Georgia needs high class professionals to take part in the country development and my goal is to became one of them. Working as editor of International Association of Dental Students of Georgia is the great opportunity for me to deal with various problems of dentistry in Georgia and realize how important is for my country a role of each dental professional.
I have made the necessary contacts with Ms. ***, contact person of Students Affairs Office, Charles University in Prague to ensure that I’m eligible to enter listed University by this scholarship. I believe that their approach will enable me to pursue my professional and personal challenges.
I would strongly encourage you to consider my application if you are looking for high motivated and diligent candidate.
THANKS IN ADVANCE!
((((”The best way to imagine your future is to create it” goes the adage.
I have been intresting in medicine since last years of my high school studies when I won various olimpiads in chemistry and biology. These experiences helped me to discover how challenging is to be perfectionist. In 2004 I entered dentistry faculty of Tbilisi State Medical University which is one of the most respectable medical schools of Georgia. Gaining a strong theoretical background in dentistry I was given opportunity to experience clinical work in University of Hacettepe, Dentistry faculty, Ankara, Turkey in 30 July-30 August, 2006, where I became fascinated with my future profession and recognized that my dream to became a professional dentist is not a madness but not a reality yet.
I think Georgia needs high class professionals to take part in the country development and my goal is to became one of them. Working as editor of International Association of Dental Students of Georgia is the great opportunity for me to deal with various problems of dentistry in Georgia and realize how important is for my country a role of each dental professional.
I have made the necessary contacts with Ms. ***, contact person of Students Affairs Office, Charles University in Prague to ensure that I’m eligible to enter listed University by this scholarship. I believe that their approach will enable me to pursue my professional and personal challenges.
I would strongly encourage you to consider my application if you are looking for high motivated and diligent candidate.
THANKS IN ADVANCE!
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Stick to the point. You've only got limited space. They want to know why you want to study that course, so cut all of the irelevant stuff.
- Stick to the point.
- You've only got limited space.
- They want to know why you want to study that course, so cut all of the irelevant stuff.
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Stick to the point. You've only got limited space. They want to know why you want to study that course, so cut all of the irelevant stuff.
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Thanks a lot nona the brit. I made it shorter, but I still can't find necessery words, I would be very thankfull if you could help me with some phrases.
"I think Georgia needs qualified/high class/or what else can i use here... professionals to take part in the process of country development(I don't li
"I think Georgia needs qualified/high class/or what else can i use here... professionals to take part in the process of country development(I don't li
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