motivation letter!please help me!!

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00I'm anna and i need to write a motivation letter to go abroad to study and work. Please could someone take a look at it please???I dont know if it's correct. Should I talk more about my academic knowledge??or about my work experience??thanks!!02br
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00Dear...,02br
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00I am very enthusiastic about the opportunity to apply for the ...program and to have the chance to go abroad to study and work.02br
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00I know that the knowledge is very important to be a successfull engineer but also is the experience, and I think that the ...program would give me the opportunity to do both and to improve as a real manager and as a person. I am sure that attending to one of the most important universities in europe and then working for a multinational corporation will give me great opportunities in the future and would improve my management and comunication skills, wich nowadays are really important .02br
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00I've finished Electronic Engineering (3 years) and now I am studying a master in Industrial Engineering (2 more years). During this four years, I have chosen the management path, therefore, I have taken a lot of management subjects and I have realised that I am good at it and that I like it. That is another reason why I think the program suits me. Finally I also would like to say that I got the 4th better grade of all my university in Electronics degree, so I think I will not have any academic problems during the program.02br
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00I am a very open minded person, very flexible, hard-worker and organized, and I adapt easily to other cultures and environments.I can easily work as a team, but I am also very competitive. I love travelling and I have been three times abroad for a long period of time and I have not have any problem. The most significant was the Erasmus program I did last year, spending 5 months in Belgium doing my final project. I loved the experience. Meeting people from all around the world, knowing other cultures and learning new languages was wonderful for me. I really would like to take part of the program.02br
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