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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Motivation letter...please check!

Could you please check my motivation letter for grammatic errors and style if possible? Thanks a lot! Any suggestions will be appreciated! Here it comes:

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am aiming at an international career in a multinational company, and I would be grateful for the opportunity to partecipate in the Top Flight Entry programme offered at XXX. My areas of interest are Customer service and Marketing and Sales.

I graduated in International Relations and Diplomacy in July 2004 from the University of XXX. My four-year degree involved several courses in international economics and law issues. During my studies in the XX2 I got increasingly interested in economics and business and took several courses in international management and trade. I am currently pursuing a Masters degree in International Relations at XX3, Spain. My research topic is „A comparative analysis of models of economic development in the EU”.

I got the opportunity to have a greater insight in international sales while working as assistant of the import/export department at XXX. I learnt to communicate effectively with clients and developed my ability to work independently. In addition, I have experience in customer service at XXX.

Top Flight Programme is the best choice for me, because of my deep interest in the European high tech industry. I believe that maintaining Europe’s competitive position requires continuous innovation and XXX is the best example of it. I am also very curious to work in an international environment since I am ambitious to learn more everyday.

I hope my qualifications would enable me to work for you since I am confident that I could make an exciting contribution to your company.

Yours sincerely,

  
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