Motivation letter to apply for management course

Hi all, I would like to apply for a management course, and one of the required documents is Motivation letter.
I've finished it, however I believe that having your comments and suggestion will make it much more better.
Your corrections are welcome.
Thanks in advance.
Below is my letter:..
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Dear …,
I’m writing to apply for the management course.

I’m greatly interested in the course since I’m now working in management field. Working full-time as a project manager, facing certain issues in managing a 12 data analyst team, planning to achieve goals, and satisfying customers with good services, I do realize the need of having good knowledge on management, especially on project field.

Loving science constantly encouraged me to major in technical field and I was proud to be graduated as an engineer in one of the most famous universities in , in PFIEV program which is dedicated to excellent Vietnamese students. Working in team shows me that management plays a significant role in life. Technical knowledge helps me to approach goals logically, while management guides me where and how I will go to the future. Business love is getting stronger in side since I supported my father’s company, realizing the new challenge and finding it much more interesting.

Right after graduated, I challenged myself in business, starting as a data analyst in ABC, an outsourcing company for OMP which now become an OMP business partner. This position provided me experience in how to identify and solve issues with facts and figures, how to define KPI reports and understanding customer expectation.

After a half year working, I was promoted to be project manager for the most important project in the company, . The team main objectives are to ensure the revenue and optimize cost for OMP by taking care of network connectivity orders worldwide.

My professional goal is to become an excellent engineering and business manager, then to be a director of my own company. To be accepted to study at your university will be a dramatic milestone in my life. If I have an opportunity to study in the course, I will devote my aspiration and strength to contribute to the success of the program, and also to make my dream come true.

I highly appreciate your taking time to consider my letter and I am awaiting your positive reply.


Yours sincerely,



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