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Atdc39 Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

motivation letter. Plz i really really need help

hello,
plz i am looking if someone can help me in my motivation letter..it's the first time i write one and i have to give it in a week. i am really lost and i don't know what to do.

i will write u what i have until now although i know its bad. the i dea is that i am a student with a b.a in economics and curently doing my masters in financial economics and i am applying for a markting company which i am really interrested in..i kind of have to tell them why i wat to enter this company although i chose aconomics as a major...

please i reaally need help

Dear sirs,

with this letter i would like to introduce my candidature as member of the client sevrice department.

I got my B.A degree in economics at 's university and now I am pursuing my education in AUB doing my masters in financial economics.

I know that my studies are somewhat different then for the job I am applying for but I am really interested in marketing and I am sure that I would bring my own ideas into the company.

Indeed having an economic background would definitely bring a new flavour for the company as well as an increase in the company production

I have attached my resume for your consideration and would welcome the opportunity to discuss in more detail my experience to date and how I may contribute to the smooth and efficient running of your business.
Thank you for your kind attention.

Yours sincerely,

sorry i am really stressed please help me outtttttttttttttttttttttt
  

Top answer

That letter is really boring. We don´t know much about you, so it´s hard to help you. Think off things that you are really good in and which might be of great use for the company.

  • That letter is really boring.
  • We don´t know much about you, so it´s hard to help you.
  • Think off things that you are really good in and which might be of great use for the company.
  • With this letter, I don´t see one single reason, why they should take you.
  • In addition, it is really boring.
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That letter is really boring. We don´t know much about you, so it´s hard to help you.

Think off things that you are really good in and which might be of great use for the company. With this letter, I don´t see one single reason, why they should take you. In addition, it is really boring. You are applying for a marketing job. You have to exagerate!
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Hi,

Not having a marketing shouldn't make too much difference; a lot of marketing and related companies like to take graduate trainees with degrees in all fields and there is quite a debate out there on whether a more general degree is actually more useful than a whole bunch of marketing 'theory' as at least the trainees don't already think they know it all! Practise is often very differe

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