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Necros Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivation letter Please help me!!!
This is my second time I'm trying to write here. The first attempt didin't had much of response. Well I hope that this will. Please help me correct this letter.
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Dear Sir or Madam:
I am a Lithuanian student from "ZZZ" gymnasium. I would like to apply for Bachelor's degree in XXX at the University of YYY. My chosen subjects are mathematics, informatics and English; therefore I would like to bring them on a new level and to make them part of my life as my carrier. I consider the University of YYY as one of the biggest stepping stones in life.
I have more than 12 years of experience with computers and games. Also I am a little afraid to do mistakes, so when I make a project or do a job I try to do it in most perfect way I can. If I make a mistake I always try to prevent it from happening ever again. Last year I attended Economics academy in my school; from there I learned the values of teamwork, how to work hard and how to command a small group of people. In my spare time I like reading books and keep track of new science discoveries and technologies. I love working with multimedia programs. Last year I made quite decent video project with Sony Vegas, and designed my own school almost singlehandedly with Google SketchUp. Then I started working with Pascal and after that C++ and Java. Until now I am still working with free Pascal.
Since age of thirteen my curiosity for games has been growing tremendously. I was fascinated by game developers: how they designed games from scratch, built game engines, dub characters, created levels and much more. Everything in game development amuses me. So I started to follow the game industry, how new technologies were brought to development and how older versions were updated. Keeping track on games and how they were created was like a hobby for me. Thanks to this hobby I think I have the necessary basic understanding of what the computer game is and how it is created. For the start I would like to experiment on mobile phones and eventually level up to the normal games.
As my carrier will probably be international, I feel that the decision to study abroad is a great investment in developing my language skills. Besides it will broaden my life experience and knowledge. Therefore I think that the University of YYY is a great choice. Wide selection of modules and a lot of attention to EU students are what made my decision to choose your University. Competitive lecturers, great study atmosphere and a chance to meet, and to learn with other country students is like a huge bonus to my decision. That is why I choose your University over one of Lithuania's. Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your positive reply.
Yours faithfully,
Necros.
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Dear Sir or Madam:
I am a Lithuanian student from "ZZZ" gymnasium. I would like to apply for Bachelor's degree in XXX at the University of YYY. My chosen subjects are mathematics, informatics and English; therefore I would like to bring them on a new level and to make them part of my life as my carrier. I consider the University of YYY as one of the biggest stepping stones in life.
I have more than 12 years of experience with computers and games. Also I am a little afraid to do mistakes, so when I make a project or do a job I try to do it in most perfect way I can. If I make a mistake I always try to prevent it from happening ever again. Last year I attended Economics academy in my school; from there I learned the values of teamwork, how to work hard and how to command a small group of people. In my spare time I like reading books and keep track of new science discoveries and technologies. I love working with multimedia programs. Last year I made quite decent video project with Sony Vegas, and designed my own school almost singlehandedly with Google SketchUp. Then I started working with Pascal and after that C++ and Java. Until now I am still working with free Pascal.
Since age of thirteen my curiosity for games has been growing tremendously. I was fascinated by game developers: how they designed games from scratch, built game engines, dub characters, created levels and much more. Everything in game development amuses me. So I started to follow the game industry, how new technologies were brought to development and how older versions were updated. Keeping track on games and how they were created was like a hobby for me. Thanks to this hobby I think I have the necessary basic understanding of what the computer game is and how it is created. For the start I would like to experiment on mobile phones and eventually level up to the normal games.
As my carrier will probably be international, I feel that the decision to study abroad is a great investment in developing my language skills. Besides it will broaden my life experience and knowledge. Therefore I think that the University of YYY is a great choice. Wide selection of modules and a lot of attention to EU students are what made my decision to choose your University. Competitive lecturers, great study atmosphere and a chance to meet, and to learn with other country students is like a huge bonus to my decision. That is why I choose your University over one of Lithuania's. Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your positive reply.
Yours faithfully,
Necros.
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