motivation letter, please check it

Hi,

Check my English, please!

Thank you,

Yohanna

Dear Sir or Madam!

I would like to apply for the autumn course starting form August 2006 with a full scholarhip if possible.

Let me introduce myself. I am a xx year old student from xxxx. I live in a capital of xxxx. I am a student at xxxx University, facultaty of social scienses and economy. It is a very famous and acknowledged school in the country. I learn sociology and economics.

The most important things in my life is my family and friends. I try to live a healthy life so if I have got enough time I gladly go in for sports. I love going out, travelling and meeting with new people. In my school I am the member of the student self-government. It is a very hard, but exciting work. We organize the school programs for example the celebrate of first-years-students.

Recently I have learned of your special folk school system through a friend, and I am extremely interested in it. I decided to apply for addmission to a xxxx. I have seen many schools website on the net, and I have to admit, that it was very difficult to choose one. There is a wide variety of all kinds of subjects, that made me curious of learning more about other fields…

In xxxx there are no xxxx. I am so curious about the xxxx education- system. I would like to go and study in xxxx because I can improve my english, I can learn in danish and xxxx culture and I am so intrested in it. I am interested in xxxx culture and history and – of course – in social sciencies, in sociology and in international relationships. Your subjects are very alluring to me. I have chosen your school among many others, because I found the description of the school and the possible subjects very attractive to me. I think it offers a great choice for me to build up international personal relations and to test myself in foreign surroundings. To spend a few months at your xxxx would be a great possibility for me to learn a new culture and meet people from all around the world.

Finally, I would like to ask for financial support (a full scholarship) to my educational fee, because unfortunately my family can not afford to finance my semester abroad.

Thank you for considering my application. I am really looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,