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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Motivation letter Master!

Hey,

I want to apply for a Master's programme in business/marketing in the UK and I need your help for my personal statement. Would be cool if you could read it, correct grammar mistakes and make suggestions what to change. Thanks so much!!

Dear Admission Team,

I am writing to apply to the Master’s Programme in (xxx) at the . Having reviewed several graduate programmes, I am confident that your and its interdisciplinary approach best meets my goals, profile and aspirations of furthering my education.



I have graduated last year from my Bachelor’s degree in Social Sciences and Business with a concentration on Marketing at the University of XXX in Germany, which is among the Top 3-Business Schools in Germany.

During my studies I gained a broad knowledge of Business and Management in general and especially a well-based knowledge in Marketing and Research, which also strengthened my huge interest in Marketing topics. To gain a broader knowledge of International Marketing and foreign markets, I studied one semester abroad at the Universidad XXX in , where I, besides improving my level of Spanish, took high-quality courses in International Marketing, Managing Services and E-Commerce. This experience confirmed my goals and ambition to work in a global and international environment after graduating from a Master’s degree. Furthermore, besides speaking English and German fluently, my level of Spanish as well as of French is intermediate, which will be advantageous both in obtaining the Master's degree and in pursuing a career in an international field.



For gaining practical work experience and deepen my skills in Business and Marketing, I worked as a Marketing intern in various global companies. Currently I am doing a six months internship in , where I work in the marketing department of XXX., one of the biggest media groups in the world. This precious experience does not only help me to gain broader professional skills in the Marketing area and improve my English language skills, but also to network on international markets and prepare for a successful career entry. Before going to I have already worked in the Marketing department of several big media and IT companies.



Besides my professional goals I am also having a personal interest in studying in the . I was always extremely interested into British culture, which is one of the reasons why I became a member and a voluntary of the twin city association . Being an active member and voluntary I visited the UK very frequently and gained a deep impression and insight of the culture and life in the . This confirmed my wish to study, live and start a career in the even more.



I am confident that my work experience and academic background will enable me to contribute to the Master Programme of Marketing, therefore I hope that I will have the opportunity to prove my abilities. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future regarding the success of my application. Should you require further information of any kind, please contact me.

  

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Dear Admission Team, (Hi - general words like "marketing," "business," "reaearch" etc. ) I am writing to apply to the Master’s Programme in (***) at the University of XX. Having reviewed several graduate programmes, I am confident that your School of Business and its interdisciplinary approach best meets my goals, profile and aspirations of furthering my education.

  • Dear Admission Team, (Hi - general words like "marketing," "business," "reaearch" etc.
  • ) I am writing to apply to the Master’s Programme in (***) at the University of XX.
  • Having reviewed several graduate programmes, I am confident that your School of Business and its interdisciplinary approach best meets my goals, profile and aspirations of furthering my education.
  • I have graduated last year with a from my Bachelor’s degree in Social Sciences and Business concentrating on with a concentration on Marketing at the University of *** in Germany, which is among the t op three 3- b usiness Schools in Germany.
  • During my studies I gained a broad knowledge of b usiness and m anagement in general and especially a well-based knowledge in m arketing and r esearch, which also strengthened my huge interest in m arketing topics.
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Dear Admission Team,
(Hi - general words like "marketing," "business," "reaearch" etc. are not capitalized.)
I am writing to apply to the Master’s Programme in (***) at the University of XX. Having reviewed several graduate programmes, I am confident that your School of Business and its interdisciplinary approach best meets my goals, profile and aspirations of furthering my e

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