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Xionor Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Motivation Letter - In need of an opinion.

0Hello. I am applying for a Bachelor's Degree, and I've read most topics here about writing a Motivation Letter, and this is my go at it. Please post your opinions of it, and possibly what needs changing. Cheers!02br
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00Dear Sir/Madame,02br
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00I am writing to you with a request to be accepted into the Bachelor’s International Business & Management Studies programme.02br
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00I have just finished High School at <School Name> in <Town> and I am planning on moving to <Country>, where I plan to settle and keep living after my education is completed.02br
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00It has always been my dream and goal to have my own business, like my mother's, and I think the International Business & Management Studies programme at <School Name> would be the best place for me to start working towards that goal. From your website, and from my friends’ descriptions, I have gotten an idea of <School Name> as a place with a very multicultural and international environment, which is something I look very much forward to experiencing. My best friend and his family live in <Town> and my girlfriend is studying at <Town>’s 00, and I have also heard that the town is very nice, thus I believe <Town> is the perfect place for me to conduct the study towards my career.02br
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00After I've gotten my Bachelor's Degree, I plan on continuing my studies with a Master’s Programme, in a similar field of study, which I have not yet decided.02br
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00I believe I have all it takes to start a career such as having my own business. During my life and my time spent in High School I have developed an ability to organize people and work well together with them on various projects or mutual interests. I am very dedicated and very hard working and I will go to great lenghts to achieve my goal, and meet the expectations set upon me. I have already had some minor business experience, handling various tasks and positions at my mother’s firm, understanding how such an environment works, what to expect of it and how to deal with the various problems it presents.02br
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00 00I consider <School Name> the perfect place for me to conduct my studies and I believe I have what <School Name> looks for, thus I hope my request will be fulfilled.02br
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00 00Thank you very much for considering my application.02br
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00 00Sincerely, <My Name>0-
  
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