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Galiondi Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
motivation letter help - please, its urgent!
Hello everyone,
Oh im so glad i have found your forum...it helped me to write that .. letter below.. still, believe that this same letter ..pretty much sucks! just because my writing skills are terrible!
I have never written a motivation letter in my life and i promissed a friend of mine , that i will do this for her... now i regret it ,but too late
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please please, someone take a look at it and tell me if its ok, is it something i better change (i bet there is!) and how..I will be very thankful to you all and my friend will owe me and you -- big time)))
thank you guys,
10th October 2005
Dear Sir/Madam,
I write to you with the intention of showing my interest and motivation in becoming part of the group of people selected to participate in the Internship Trainee Program in the USA. I have heard so many good things about this program. Few of my friends applied last year , got approved and are still on the training program. I hear about their plans about their future after they finish the program, i hear about their experiance while in the USA, i hear so many exciting things and i really would like to have the opportunity to train and live in the USA, also to meet more people and learn about their culture.
My name is Ivelina Dimitrova, a dynamic and enthusiastic 25 year-old bulgarian woman. Armed with 7 years of experience in the hospitality industry, 1 of which I have spent abroad, in a great place called Agia Napa, Cyprus, today I am looking for a position in a Hotel or Restaurant chain, that is going to give me the chance to develope even better skills in the hospitality industry and to take an active part in their development, with a new professional challenge to face: I want to put my abilities to work for you.
In addition to my extensive hospitality experience, I have excellent communication skills. I always maintain a gracious and professional manner when communicating with people, including customers and hotel/restaurant staff. My abroad experience and range of skills make me a superior candidate for this program. I am confident that with my strong motivation, my personality, my international and significant practical experiences and with the International Trainee Program on top, I will have a solid foundation for a successful and fulfilling career, in which I plan to weld relationships across cultures and ensure that intercultural communication takes place effectively.
My resume, which is enclosed, contains additional information on my experience and skills. I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss the training program with you and to provide further information on my candidacy. I can be reached anytime via my cell phone(+359)889-254338
Yours faithfully
Oh im so glad i have found your forum...it helped me to write that .. letter below.. still, believe that this same letter ..pretty much sucks! just because my writing skills are terrible!
I have never written a motivation letter in my life and i promissed a friend of mine , that i will do this for her... now i regret it ,but too late
)please please, someone take a look at it and tell me if its ok, is it something i better change (i bet there is!) and how..I will be very thankful to you all and my friend will owe me and you -- big time
)))thank you guys,
10th October 2005
Dear Sir/Madam,
I write to you with the intention of showing my interest and motivation in becoming part of the group of people selected to participate in the Internship Trainee Program in the USA. I have heard so many good things about this program. Few of my friends applied last year , got approved and are still on the training program. I hear about their plans about their future after they finish the program, i hear about their experiance while in the USA, i hear so many exciting things and i really would like to have the opportunity to train and live in the USA, also to meet more people and learn about their culture.
My name is Ivelina Dimitrova, a dynamic and enthusiastic 25 year-old bulgarian woman. Armed with 7 years of experience in the hospitality industry, 1 of which I have spent abroad, in a great place called Agia Napa, Cyprus, today I am looking for a position in a Hotel or Restaurant chain, that is going to give me the chance to develope even better skills in the hospitality industry and to take an active part in their development, with a new professional challenge to face: I want to put my abilities to work for you.
In addition to my extensive hospitality experience, I have excellent communication skills. I always maintain a gracious and professional manner when communicating with people, including customers and hotel/restaurant staff. My abroad experience and range of skills make me a superior candidate for this program. I am confident that with my strong motivation, my personality, my international and significant practical experiences and with the International Trainee Program on top, I will have a solid foundation for a successful and fulfilling career, in which I plan to weld relationships across cultures and ensure that intercultural communication takes place effectively.
My resume, which is enclosed, contains additional information on my experience and skills. I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss the training program with you and to provide further information on my candidacy. I can be reached anytime via my cell phone(+359)889-254338
Yours faithfully
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Actually, it is quite good, Galiondi. Here's my revision: 10 October 2005 Dear Sir or Madam: I write to you with the intention of showing my interest and motivation in becoming part of the group of people selected to participate in your Internship Trainee Program in the USA. I have heard many good things about this program.
- Actually, it is quite good, Galiondi.
- Here's my revision: 10 October 2005 Dear Sir or Madam: I write to you with the intention of showing my interest and motivation in becoming part of the group of people selected to participate in your Internship Trainee Program in the USA.
- I have heard many good things about this program.
- Several of my friends applied last year, were approved and are still on the training program.
- I hear about their plans for their future after they finish the program; I hear about their experiances while in the USA; I hear many exciting things, and I would really like to share the opportunity to train and live in the USA, and to meet others and learn about their culture.
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Actually, it is quite good, Galiondi. Here's my revision:
10 October 2005
Dear Sir or Madam:
I write to you with the intention of showing my interest and motivation in becoming part of the group of people selected to participate in your Internship Trainee Program in the USA. I have heard many good things about this program. Several of my friends applied
10 October 2005
Dear Sir or Madam:
I write to you with the intention of showing my interest and motivation in becoming part of the group of people selected to participate in your Internship Trainee Program in the USA. I have heard many good things about this program. Several of my friends applied
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thank you, thank you, sooooo much
It sounds better now..Hope my friend is happy, because i definately am
It sounds better now..Hope my friend is happy, because i definately am
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