I have written a motivation letter, because I would like to participate in a project (voluntary work).
I would be very grateful if someone could correct my mistakes, because my English isn't so good and I'm not sure that in this letter is everything alright.
Thank you very-very much!!!!
Eszter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am ****, a 18-year-old girl from ****. I am sitting for my final examination in May (at ****).
I would like to apply for participation as a volunteer in Ecumenical Diaconal Year Network before I go to university.
I think that this experience would provide me with a huge opportunity of having international exposure and multicultural perspective which is very important in our changing world.
Furthermore, I feel this program would mean a great deal for my professional and personal growth. It could help me enriching my culture and improving my English and/or German.
I am interested in social sciences and may be I will study them later and I find the experience in social work would be very useful for my university studies.
Besides this, I like studying foreign languages. In favour practicing my English and/or German I am ready to take language lessons in another language.
In addition, I think I am not prepared for going to university in September 2010. I have really good marks, but I would like to care for something that differs from the things I have done in my life till now and I would like to see myself, my faith and my future from a different aspect. I find the distance and the voluntary work could help me drafting answers.
To continue with, I would like to develop my personality and deep my relationship with God. I would like to recognize God’s plan and wish for my life and be a more patient, independent and steadfast person.
I think voluntary work is a fantastic manner in which I can learn how to help people in my environment in the best way.
Last but not least, I would like to see new places and get acquainted with another culture and society.
I find I can adjust easily to fit into any work environment and have no problem with working as part of a team.
I have some experience in work with kids, because I am an assisting leader in a youth group (young people between the age 12 and 16 years). I had with them two summer camps and we meet fast every week during the school year.
Moreover, I held sometimes Sunday school for pupils from primary school.
In 2004, I took part in a summer camp with the **** and after that I began to attend their youth group. Notwithstanding the distance from my home, I am very grateful to be a part of this community and I really cleave by them.
My other activities and interest include spending time twith my friends, reading, doing sports, listening to music, watching movies, etc..
I have a high interest in literature, history, foreign languages, philosophy and social sciences. Studying in the school was always important for me.
To sum up, I am eager to meet new challenges and find ways to grow as a person. I am ready to learn and I would be very grateful if you would give me a chance to contribute to this project.
I thank you for your time and hope for a positive response.
If you have any questions, please contract me via e-mail.
I look forward to your reply
Yours faithfully
****
Top answer
your English is brilliant, better than alot of people who were born and bred here. don't worry
— Anonymous
your English is brilliant, better than alot of people who were born and bred here.
don't worry
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