Motivation letter for university need help

Can someone tell me if this letter is good or not and give me some points:


I want to come to your university because I think you are the best choice for me. Your economics program gives all the benefits I am looking for. My sister has a PHD in economics so I am familiar with the study and the work I will be doing. My mother is a math and informatics teacher and my father is a colonel in the army, so I never had problems with discipline.

In school my grades have always been over 5.50 and in math never below a 6. I have participated in lots of math competitions on a national level and have always been in the top 10 or higher. My interests are also in theatre, I have performed in many plays and in we have won the “golden mask”. I am also the class president and help out in the school newspaper and TV. Many people think that doing so much work is vary hard, but for me it’s relaxing to work with people. I have somewhat of a gift to make friends of people for a short time and I like working with them.

I expect to make a lot of friends and relationships in your university that will help me further on in life and career. I am highly motivated to become one of your students and my confidents in that is ensured by my ambitious. I have confidents in my skills and me.

Please feel free to contact me for any further information or documents. I hope to hear from you soon.