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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivation letter for university application
Can you check my letter, please?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to you to apply for the International Business programme in MAMK.
To begin with, I'd like to present some background information about myself. I'm from Pushkin which is near Saint-Petersburg. At the moment I'm studying in high school. I've been traveling much and I'm intrested in North countries, especially in Finland.
Finland has a very stable economy and personally I think that it's worth to study Its' example. Moreover, I appreciate habitant's attitude to ecology in Finland and I want Russian people treat ecology as well as in Fnalnd.
When I started to think about my future career path I decided to visit some Finnish universities and I chose MAMK.
It is believed that there is one of the best education system in Finland. I've chose MAMK because studying there will help me learn about IB and study languages and culture. And I hope that it'll give me opportunites to find a job, where I make a contribution in cooperation between Russia and Finland.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Valerya
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to you to apply for the International Business programme in MAMK.
To begin with, I'd like to present some background information about myself. I'm from Pushkin which is near Saint-Petersburg. At the moment I'm studying in high school. I've been traveling much and I'm intrested in North countries, especially in Finland.
Finland has a very stable economy and personally I think that it's worth to study Its' example. Moreover, I appreciate habitant's attitude to ecology in Finland and I want Russian people treat ecology as well as in Fnalnd.
When I started to think about my future career path I decided to visit some Finnish universities and I chose MAMK.
It is believed that there is one of the best education system in Finland. I've chose MAMK because studying there will help me learn about IB and study languages and culture. And I hope that it'll give me opportunites to find a job, where I make a contribution in cooperation between Russia and Finland.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Valerya
Top answer
You have obvious spelling errors in your letter. You know how to spell Finland, yet I see that it is misspelled. Please ensure that you have spaces between your paragraphs.
- You have obvious spelling errors in your letter.
- You know how to spell Finland, yet I see that it is misspelled.
- Please ensure that you have spaces between your paragraphs.
- Otherwise it is too hard to read.
- My guess is that you pasted your letter into the text box.
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You have obvious spelling errors in your letter. You know how to spell Finland, yet I see that it is misspelled.
Please ensure that you have spaces between your paragraphs. Otherwise it is too hard to read. My guess is that you pasted your letter into the text box. After you pasted your letter, the spaces were removed. To solve this issue, please do the following:
1) When y
Please ensure that you have spaces between your paragraphs. Otherwise it is too hard to read. My guess is that you pasted your letter into the text box. After you pasted your letter, the spaces were removed. To solve this issue, please do the following:
1) When y
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