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Diego Cárdenas Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Motivation letter for University

Hello guys, Im new here and I was wondering if I could get like a Lot of help, I need to write a motivation letter and I have little to 0 idea of what im doing, so if you dont bother of having your eyes bleeding with my writing I would be really grateful with your help.

so here it goes:

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Diego, I am Spaniard, and I am looking forward to study in university name University of Apllied Sciences.
Since a while I have been searching throught, literally, a ton of universities and their programmes in many european countrys.
However, from the moment I found university name* (Especifically *degree name) I started feeling really exited and made getting
to study in name again my priority number one. The ambient I could see in the programme video, the quality of education you are
so proud of, the approach for getting things done. All this things just amazed me and maked so hard for me to look up for another universities.

In 2012 I graduated from Hihgschool in name* and in that same year I applied for *x University in Spain and got accepted for x programme.
Unfortunately, the quality of education and the lack of passion shown by the professorate made me regret that decision and I ended up leaving.
Nevertheless, taking everything into count there were some nice things too, as example, I discovered my, before that momment hidden, passion about coding that I
never imagined I would be good at, but at the same time I knew there was something missing for me in that degree something I found when I started making Games with Unity.

Playing games was one of my passions since god knows when, besides mixing that aspect with my coding attitude just made me realize this was my path to follow.
My goal here will be to become a game developer, get to work with a big company after my graduation and, the most important, have the chance to add my bit to help
the growth of Esports and be able talk about it in a future and be proud of it. I know it will be though but it will be worth it, and i also know that I will find
the tools and orientation I need to acomplish my goal in your university.

I am very excited about this opportunity and confident, if given the chance, that I could meet your expectations. Thank you for your time reviewing my letter,
I welcome the opportunity to discuss in the Skype interview my qualifications, portfolio and fit for the programme.

Your Faithfully,

Diego Cardenas.
  

Top answer

I have highlighted some areas that need attention, and made some suggestions. Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Diego, I am a Spaniard, and I am looking forward to study in Some Wonderful University , Department of Apllied Sciences. Since a while I have been searching throught , literally, a ton (too casual!

  • I have highlighted some areas that need attention, and made some suggestions.
  • Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Diego, I am a Spaniard, and I am looking forward to study in Some Wonderful University , Department of Apllied Sciences.
  • Since a while I have been searching throught , literally, a ton (too casual!
  • ) of universities and their programmes in many european countrys .
  • However, from the moment I found Some Wonderful University, ( Especifically *degree name) I started feeling really exited and made my admittance to getting to study in Some Wonderful University again my priority number one.
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I have highlighted some areas that need attention, and made some suggestions.

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Diego, I am a Spaniard, and I am looking forward to study in Some Wonderful University, Department of Apllied Sciences.
Since a while I have been searching
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I made the corrections (I hope), thanks a lot for the help!
Ended up with something like this:

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Diego, I am a Spaniard, and I am looking forward to study in Some Wonderful University.
For a long time I have been searching for universities and their programmes in Europe.
However, from the moment I found Some Wonderful Universi
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The atmosphere I could see in the programme video, the quality of education you are
so proud of, the approach for getting things done - all of that matter just captivated me and made
it so hard to even consider look for a different university.

taking everything into account,...

... when I started making

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