Motivation letter for university

Hello mates!!

Few last days i had worked on my motivation letter. Maybe somebody could check it out. English is my foreign language, so maybe not the greatest work but I put all my heart in it, so won't be harsh, pretty much all my life in few lines. >>E-mail Email Removed<<. Please e-mail me because my account is pending approval at the moment.

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University of USA
March 5, 2011

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am applying to your AP degree program of "Marketing Management" with specialization in practice-oriented teaching starting in September 2011. My career ambition is to become entrepreneur and someday I hope to be my own boss.

So this is the part where I am supposed to say how cute, funny and smart I am, but in fact I am not the smartest guy. So many ups and downs in my life. Some good some not so good. In senior year of high school I realized that I want to accomplish something with my life. Then instead of living my life in vain I started to be intelligent. I studied so hard and first time in my life my marks was admirable, actually in mathematics and economics I was third smartest guy in my class. Came last few months of senior year and I found out that I have lymphoma, everything that I was working for became useless. Everything started to fall apart; my life was not the same as it was.

Not the easiest year of my life but if this could not bring me down then nothing can. Even thought that this experience took a lot away from me, it was interesting way to find out how much even the simplest things means to me.

But now when I am strong and healthy inside and out; I would like to try and explain what made choose Marketing Management and Denmark. From early age I love to earn money on my own. In so many things I see opportunity of entrepreneurship and way of helping people. So much gripping ideas. And some day I would like to be able to bring them a life. When I heard about Denmark and that wonderful opportunity for European citizens to study for free at that very own moment I knew that I want to be part of this kind-hearted country. I am genuinely appreciating Denmark for supporting the education and knowing the importance of it.



This new me is confident and hardworking person and I am certain that I will bring a high level of energy and enthusiasm to your program. Never the less I am sure to excel your expectations, because of both my academic and interpersonal skills. Furthermore in my free time I am creative and sociable. I am really good at playing harmonica and hockey. I am respectable extreme bicycle rider and I see this break as a start of my further life, as a chance to be what I ever would want to be.



Thank you for considering my application I am hoping to be admitted to USA university. And I hope that with help of your studies I will be able to make my dreams come true.

I am looking forward for your reply.

Yours Sincerely,

Chui Long Hui