Motivation letter for University

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00I am witting to apply for the postgraduate studies starting in the fall of 2007. 02br
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00I found that the Master’s programme in the 01i00Human Rights02i00 corresponds well with my future plans in doing practical and legal work for human rights organizations.00 00It is my ambition to be admitted, and pursue my postgraduate studies in the field of human rights and gain extensive competencies for future academic research and professional work.02br
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00My desire to study in the area of human rights reflects my interests in contemporary human rights issues, with a particular focus on human right to health. I want to gain broader understanding in International human rights law and implementation of social and economic rights. Furthermore, I am interested in human rights impact assessment and related research.02br
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00During the xxx Bachelor Degree the program guided me in systematical researching, analytical thinking, and information evaluation. During my xxx practice I became interested in human rights realization through community work00.00 In addition to my xxx studies, I have vast experience in work with human rights education programmes as well as implementing different trainings on human rights education. During my training experience I have acquired list of competencies including: the capacity to develop and manage a training or education programme on human rights education, while simultaneously applying quality criteria.00 00Moreover, I am attending long term advanced training course in human rights education organized by the 01i00xxx. 02i00I am willing to continue my work in human rights education field and I would love to contribute to 01i00Advocacy, Training and Education program02i00 in xxx. 02br
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00I have fulfilled my interests in human rights through becoming involved in a number of volunteering and internship opportunities ranging from being a human rights activist to being a peer educator in HIV/AIDS prevention program. Furthermore, I have been actively involved in implementation of “Youth Friendly Health Services” project. This project was conducted in partnership with UNDP and involved a lot of discussions about right to health. 02br
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00When I finished my Bachelor studies in xxx I got an offer to coordinate xxx campaign. While working for the campaign I acquired knowledge and skills in advocacy building and lobbying for human rights as well as strengthened my desire to connect future academic life and work with human rights promotion and protection.02br
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00As a committed, thoughtful and hard-working person with long time experience in human rights activism and willingness to work for human rights organizations, I believe that I am a good candidate for the Master’s Program in Human Rights. 0-