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Guest Posted 22 years ago
Letter Writing

Motivation letter for university

Can someone check them?


I‘ve studied for industrial engineer electronics the last 4 years in Ostend. In this previous education, I’ve learned about the most important electronic principles that are used in nowadays technology. In some courses about quality, safety, economy, yet I’ve seen a little bit how to manage a company. I found it very interesting and I want to learn more about how to manage an industrial company.

I also realise more and more that there is big gap between theory and practice. There’s a long way between the research and the sale of a product. Reading the information at the website about the education, master in industrial management, it seems the perfect way to reduce this gap between theory and practice. I hope I could participate in the lessons product and production management.

I hope this course is a useful addition to my current education that I can use for my later professional career. This course will definitely increase my opportunities to get a good job.

With kind regards,
  

Top answer

Guest, Your letter needs a lot of work, mostly on the content side. Your letter seems weak because it seems that you are just looking for a job. I don't see any motivation or passion in your letter.

— MountainHiker

  • Guest, Your letter needs a lot of work, mostly on the content side.
  • Your letter seems weak because it seems that you are just looking for a job.
  • I don't see any motivation or passion in your letter.
  • I have given it some thoughts and created a new letter, though I am not happy with it.
  • If it were my letter, I would use it as a start.
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Guest,

Your letter needs a lot of work, mostly on the content side. Your letter seems weak because it seems that you are just looking for a job. I don't see any motivation or passion in your letter.

I have given it some thoughts and created a new letter, though I am not happy with it. If it were my letter, I would use it as a start. I would let it sit for a couple days, r
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Dear anon1,

I have read Your post and found several useful truck for myself.I think it was a good start for that guy, but he obviously needs to improve the text.Also i agrre with that not to be ordinary applicant one should not use "job" as motivator.

I would like to apply for one year as a European Volunteer programme by JEF-France Young European France organization and I need a
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Hallo,

Can someone check my motivaton letter for Phd studies?

Thanks

Ena

Dear Mr. ***

I would like to apply for vacancy at the *** University, *** Department, project: “***" announced on your site.

I have completed five years of undergraduate studies and two years of master studies at the Department of *** of Faculty ***, University ***, and d
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Hey ; my name is muse

Iám interresting realy how you help each other.

secondly, I found also very difficult to writing motivation letters to universty .

therfore i need your help
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Thanks, I have gone through Your helping message. thanks again..

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im a student of Computer Scinece & engineering of final year seeking MS admission in Sweden (KTH).They asked for a motivation letter,can any 1 give me a sample or template.

regards

diner

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If you look for a sample just look in the forum. There are several Motivation Letters including my own...
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Thank you all, Very helpful information
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