Motivation letter for traineeship

Hello!

I need to write my motivation letter more interesting to call attention to the reader. It is really neccessary for me to get a traineeship, because this is a requirement to study my desirable course of studies. Please help me to attract interest and correct my mistakes.

Thanks in advance! Maja

Dear Ms./Mr. ...??? / To whom it may concern,

I intend to study "Shipping and ship finance" course at Hamburg School of Business Administration.

My interest in that subject is based on a wide range of future job opportunities and prospective type of this course.

Furthermore, half of the activities will be handled with the assistance of a company. This possibility is very attractive as it gives more experience and practical knowledge than average studies.

Cooperation with such a thriving and competitive company as ...??? would be a challenge which gives me a great chance to develop my personal skills.

I am motivated, hard-working and responsible. My creativeness and ability to work with people help me to be an effective member of a team.

My CV with photo and further information are enclosed. All documents are in PDF format. If necessary other formats are available on request.

I would be grateful if you positively consider my application.

Yours sincerely,
Maja ...