Motivation letter for studying abroad

Hallo,

ich veröffentliche hier mein Motivationsschreiben. Kann mir jemand sagen, was ich besser machen könnte oder wo ich Fehler habe?

Danke! Simon

I am a twenty-three year old student of Engineering and Management at University of (XXXX). I acquired a Bachelor’s degree with distinction from university of (XXXXXX) and I am now studying for a Master’s degree.
My Interest in Studies at University of Pittsburgh
My studies allow me to take various courses in the field of economics, Business Administration, Finance and Technology. I am especially interested in taking courses in engineering of plastics at University of Pittsburgh. If possible, I am going to write my Master thesis at the institute of polymer technology in Erlangen. In addition, the University of XXXX offers several courses of Business Administration which will be of interest for me.
My skills and abilities
I am a particularly ambitious student and my achievements in studies are above the average. During my Bachelor’s Degree, I took English courses for two years and passed the exams successfully with the best possible mark (1.0). I already prepared for the TOEFL and registered at their website, so I will be able to pass the test in short term.
As I have already spoken to some of my fellow students who lived in the United States for a while, I am familiar with the costs and paperwork needed (Visa, insurance, vaccination, passport, flight and accommodation).
My professional aims
After my Master’s degree, or possibly my doctorate in Engineering, I am going to work for an international company as BASF or Bayer. That is why, besides achieving advanced skills in the English language, I need to get familiar with working in an international working environment.
Besides gaining technical expertise and professional skills, studies abroad may widen my cultural horizons and broaden my personal skills.