Motivation Letter for Student Visa

Hello..can anybody check my motivation letter for mistakes if exist? i will be thankfull for your hep.

To Whom It May Concern:
I am writing to apply for a long-term student visa in order to pursue my Bachelor's Degree in Mechanical Engineering at ***** University.

I am a High School graduate. I have finished my Secondary studying in 2013 with a rate of 89%. Mechanical Engineering is something I really want to study and want a job in because I have always enjoyed taking things apart and putting them back together again. I am fascinated by mechanisms even from my childhood. Moreover, I found that this field offers the opportunity to create something tangible and useful, and it will surely gives me the greatest joy knowing my creations will be used by others.

I have decided to study in Germany because it is a civilized country sophisticated and at the forefront of this industry –Mechanical Engineering. Moreover, the German universities are well known over the world and one of the best. The education system in Germany is very good, high and will definitely open many doors for me.

Since ***** university was ranked second in the Federal Republic of Germany in one of the previous years, I will be very proud and lucky to get my higher degree from one of the greatest and most prestigious technical universities in Germany.

I'm aware that studying abroad is not easy, However, I believe I have enough motivation to succeed and I hope that I will see myself graduating from a world-class university in the coming bright and enlightening years.

Looking forward hearing your - hopefully positive - response of my visa application.

Sincerely yours,
Waleed Al-Madari