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Papiong_english Posted 20 years ago
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motivation letter for scholarship, help me

This is my motivation letter to get scholarship, but I think there's still many mistakes that I need your help to correct, so please help me coz this will be very important to get this scholarship. the deadline is still long about april but I need to prepare all things well before the time. For all your help, thank

During the past 5 years I’m working as a Custom Officer at Customs Headquarter in Jakarta and the emphasis of my job is to analyze the report of company trade and the commodity of company imported in order to prevent illegal action in import process. My background education is Customs Academy that emphasis study in customs and excise rules, international trade, goods clasification and everything related with customs and I continued my study and got bachelor of economic at Indonesia Economic High School in Accounting Information System that emphasis study in accounting, management and finance. I found that my education background still sufficient to support me for conducting my daily job, because one of my career aspirations is to join senior management in Customs Headquarter. So, in the recent time, I am keep trying to get any foundation that would like to support me get higher level of study.

To furhter my career aspirations of becoming part of senior management in Customs Headquarter, I want to obtain a Master’s Degree in International Bussiness. Having this knowledge will allow me to better understand the principle of companies conducting their business internationally. With advance and change in world trade, I believe Customs Management must have solid understanding, supported by a strong academic foundation, of how to prevent any illegal transaction in import process and meet any chalenge with good solution in the future.

Personally, I am a perseverance person, who is motivated and ambitious. My manager and co-wookers know me as resources person and hardworker. My enough knowledge in english will help me to adapt quickly in field of study teach in that languages. I also have involved in many social events that related with other people both in public, church and my work circumtances, so I am able to adapt and work together with people which different cultural background with me. In the past I ever was a member of Terorism and Money Laundring Training celebrated by FBI and IRS which involved and made me work with foreigners.

To me, as a young male customs officer, it is my dream to know much knowledge related with Customs to support Indonesian Customs be equal with other customs in the world. For making this my dream come true, I found that AMINEF is offering Fulbright Scholarship through my institution for government officers that would like to apply.

I hope that I will be accepted as an applicant and a beneficiary of Fulbright Scholarship to study at one of university in USA in periode 2007-2008 academic years. I understand that admission to the Fulbright Scholarship is competitive, but I am also confident that I’m qualified and eager, and prepared for all its challenges. I would be most grateful if you could give my application your most favorable consideration.
  

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it rambles be new and interesting! you do sound very sophisticated though but they get millions of these why not do something out of the ordinary and stand out! we get that you are confident and qualified but make us see it and be interested in it.

  • it rambles be new and interesting!
  • you do sound very sophisticated though but they get millions of these why not do something out of the ordinary and stand out!
  • we get that you are confident and qualified but make us see it and be interested in it.
  • keep me awake.
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blah blah blah...it rambles be new and interesting! you do sound very sophisticated though but they get millions of these why not do something out of the ordinary and stand out! we get that you are confident and qualified but make us see it and be interested in it. keep me awake.

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