Motivation Letter for Scholarship

Hi everyone,

plese I need your help!

I v written a cover letter which is sooooooooo important for me may you please have a look at it and give me your opinion,any modifications?suggestions????

many thanks in advance:

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in applying for undergraduate course in Mechanical engineering, I am a **** citizen born in ****** I hold a GCSE ***** scientific baccalaureate at a rate of 82.5%.
I started working at an early age in a plastic factory as an operator on machines and I was impressed by the mechanics of the machines and the manufacturing lines, so I decided to complete my school in order to study Mechanical engineering at the university.
In 2009 I had been accepted to study in Mechanical design & production engineering undergraduate course at the University of ****** , I had passed 4 complete years with good results. During my study, I kept on working as a part time job to gain more practical experience and I was sent to a German machines manufacturer for the purpose of training on purchased machines from a **** company, I enjoy learning on modern machines. During my visit in Germany, I started learning German and my German language now is good.
Unfortunately, the crises in ***** obstructed my study and I could not complete my final year, I left the country and currently am staying in ***** , I found the expenses abroad is very high to complete my study , so I am sure that ****** scholarship program is my chance to follow-up my study
In addition, I am very eager to continue studying mechanical engineering at one of the famous universities in Europe where I can get a high qualified learning in order to get my bachelor degree. After getting my bachelor degree, I am planning to start my Master course and make my research in the field of plastic industry.
I am convinced that studying abroad at one of the European universities will characterize my educational background and make me a successful engineer for my future carrier.
I concerned about industrial fairs where I can stay informed about latest innovations and automation solutions, I visited almost all the fairs which held in ****** as well as some international fairs in ***** such as PlastEurAsia & WIN automation fairs. I gained a lot of experience in the field of plastic injection and CNC machinery.

I like traveling very much and especially where there is an opportunity to develop my lingual and practical skills
Finally, I strongly wish to get admission for this program and believe that the combination of my experience and training is well-suited to the mechanical engineering undergraduate course. Please find enclosed a copy of my resume with additional information about my qualifications.
Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to receiving your reply.

Yours faithfully,