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987123 Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing

Motivation letter for scholarship

hello guys
um trying to write a motivational letter for an exchange program (undergraduate)
here's the scholarship instructions :

"Statement of no more than 1 page to indicate motivation for the course, host university and EPIC programme."

and here's what I wrote :

dear Mr or Ms

hereby I would like to explain my wish to study accounting at the university of Cardiff the first semester of the next year September 2013.
ever since I heard of the possibility of studying abroad , that idea hasn't left my mind. my desire for going to study in a different country keeps growing. there are several reasons that make me want to study abroad.
first of all I would like some international experience. after my study, i wish to become an accountant in an international company, so studying abroad would be a large step towards achieving that goal.

Secondly, I enjoy experiencing new cultures. I am very interested in different cultures, so studying abroad is a great opportunity to continue my studies, and learn new cultures and meet interesting foreign students at the same time. When I was younger, I went to Newcastle on holiday once, and ever since I've been interested in the European culture. Studying abroad would be a perfect chance to increase my knowledge of the English culture.

Further more, I would like to improve my English. Even though I write, speak and understand English already quite well, it is not fluent yet. Studying in a foreign country will help me bring my English to a higher level. This is also important for my future job desire at an international business.

luckily the courses given at my current university x university is in English that would make it easier for me to adapt to the new way of studying, also, the courses given at Cardiff university are fairly similar to the courses given at x university, so my study progress shouldn't be slowed down, which is important as well. I look forward studying at the Cardiff University in the UK already, and I hope I am given the opportunity to have a challenging, exciting and of course enlightening period in Wales!
Sincerely,
*******

I know i haven't included the courses um still trying to figure that out,
I would appreciate any suggestions and improvements
  
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