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Cutieangel Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Motivation letter for Primary School application <<Urgent !!, Pls comment>

Kindly give me some comment for below ......Anybody's prompt advice will be very very appreciate as I need this on Jun 3....Apologize for my late request as I'm just new to this forum.....


We are very grateful and appreciative of you spending precious time in reading this unexpected letter of ours. The main purpose of this letter is to seek an opportunity of education in your school for my daughter, XXXX,

We have heard about your school’s sound reputation from many parents and know well about your school’s mission, philosophy, curriculum and facilities from your school’s Web site. l am especially impressed that your school emphasis a balanced and all-rounded development of one’s potential. I have visited your school with my daughter during last year’s Open Day and she likes the environment very much.

Our daughter is currently studying in K3 at XXXXX. She performs well in many aspects – self care & discipline, linguistic development, creativity and emotional development. XXXXX is an adorable girl. She has a bright and cheerful character that contributes to her good social community. She has strong curiosity and energetic to explore new things around her. Our daughter has very creative thinking and she will have much idea arise from her little brain. For example, she will introduce new game rules for card and board games.

We believe in the Multiple Intelligent theory. As such, we have arranged different nature’s interest classes for my daughter. On one hand, we wish her having a balance development. On the other hand, we hope to find out our daughter’s potential talent and develop her interest through various exposure and stimulation.

We would be appreciated if we could be given an interview (anytime) with the Principal for further clarification and we sure that the Principal could obtain a more comprehensive understanding of our daughter.


  

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Hi, One blank means one word. Hope that helps. Cutieangel We are very grateful and appreciative of you spending precious time in reading this unexpected letter of ours.

  • Hi, One blank means one word.
  • Hope that helps.
  • Cutieangel We are very grateful and appreciative of you spending precious time in reading this unexpected letter of ours.
  • The main purpose of this letter is to seek an opportunity of education in your school for my daughter, XXXX, (be straightforward with your request) We have heard about your school’s sound reputation from many parents and ____ your school’s mission, philosophy, curriculum and facilities from your school’s Web site.
  • ) your school (possessive case) emphasis ____(preposition) a balanced and all-rounded development of one’s potential.
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Hi,

One blank means one word. Hope that helps.
CutieangelWe are very grateful and appreciative of you spending precious time in reading this unexpected letter of ours. The main purpose of this letter is to seek an opportunity of education in your school for my daughter, XXXX, (be straightforward with your request)

We have heard about your

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