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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
motivation letter for PhD vacancy in Europe
0 Hello everyone!! please check my motivation letter for PhD position, is it wrong to write about my private interests (like location boyfriend in that country, I want to get a PhD vacancy)? I wrote 5th paragraph in in detail cause they asked for 00 relevant research experience. 02 br
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00 Dear Prof 00 01 span 01 a 01 span 00 ***, 02 span 02 a 02 span 02 br
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00 On the 00 *** 00 website 00 I have seen 00 there is a vacancy for a PhD position starting in September 2007. 01 i 00 I am writing to express my great interest in applying 02 i 00 for this PhD vacancy in 00 *** 01 span 00 02 span 00 in *** Universiteit . 01 span 00 02 span 02 br
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00 I graduated from Faculty o***, 00 *** 00 in June 2006 and 01 span 00 I obtained a specialist degree 02 span 00 in ***. More narrow specialization is ***. During my studies (5 years) I got thorough knowledges in various objects and 01 i 00 I was always a curious and research-active student 02 i 00 . On the third year of education I have done my practical research work as a laboratory assistant in the ***, 00 , CITY 00 . 01 span 00 Working there I have adjoined for the first time with scientific investigations, have learnt to work in collective with highly qualified specialists that has helped me to discipline and organize my 02 span 00 01 span 00 work in future. 02 span 02 br
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00 Last two years of education I’m in detail studied my specialization in 00 *** Institute of ***, 00 CITY 00 . 00 Basic specialists of our Institute lecture us profile subjects like as: SOME SUBJECTS and many others. 00 02 br
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00 I was doing my diploma work in Group of *** in *** 00 Institute of ***, CITY 00 for 2 years. I completed and presented my graduation thesis on the theme “***”, were marked as “excellent”. 01 span 00 Working in lab I have gained not only major skills of practical job in the field of ***, have familiarized with many accessible physical research technique, have learnt self-supporting job, but also have gained appearance experience at various conferences, compilations of reports, writing an articles. 02 span 02 br
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00 I was looking for a PhD vacancy in 00 last autumn, but unfortunately for some domestic reasons I can't left and I had passed examinations to PhD position in my Institute. Last year 01 span 00 I worked on the following theme 02 span 00 "***" in the 00 Laboratory of *** 00 in the 00 *** Institute of *** 00 , CITY 00 . 00 01 span 00 I studied influence of various ionic liquids on homogeneous process of hydrocarbons oxidation. Investigated reactions were hydrocarbons oxidation in such aggressive solvent as acetic acid in the presence of palladium complexes. I had been considered a number of various ionic liquids (EMImBF 01 sub 00 4 02 sub 00 , BMImBF 01 sub 00 4 02 sub 00 , BMImOAc and EMImBr) with various substitutions to an imidazole ring and different anions. The greatest interest caused by the last one. It’s interesting to notice, that addition insignificant quantities of EMImBr sharply changed the direction of reaction and distribution of products. Gas chromatography, mass spectroscopy and NMR were used to analyze products distribution. The condition of palladium complexes in reaction mixture were studied by UV-vis spectroscopy. 02 span 02 br
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00 By getting to know more about 00 *** 00 , I understood that for several reasons this is the best place and opportunity for me. The theme of ionic liquids and their widely application in *** is very interesting to me, and I’d like to be engaged in it further. Unfortunately, there are no investigations on a large scale on this theme 00 00 in our Institute. This PhD position will give me a chance to work at higher level, with use of more perfect equipment that is enough difficult for me here, 01 b 00 02 b 00 to work with other people, experts in area of ***, to learn a lot of the new. Also it’s a great experience of 00 studying abroad 00 will help me to develop more highly my methodical abilities, practical and theoretical skills, 00 enrich my curriculum vitae, as well as gain more independence. 00 Having finished PhD position in the 00 *** 00 , it will give me more possibilities for the further career growth. It’s 00 the perfect opportunity for me to meet other cultures, learn another language and 00 traditions, connect with other interesting peoples, to get new friends. Having received this PhD vacancy we become a little territorially closer with my boyfriend, who’s occupies PhD position in a 00 , University ***. 02 br
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00 At last as a hard-working and responsible person I believe that I am a good candidate for this PhD project. 02 br
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00 Thank you very much for considering my application and I look forward to hearing from you in the near future regarding the success of my application. 02 br
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00 Yours sincerely 00 , 02 br
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00 Dear Prof 00 01 span 01 a 01 span 00 ***, 02 span 02 a 02 span 02 br
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00 On the 00 *** 00 website 00 I have seen 00 there is a vacancy for a PhD position starting in September 2007. 01 i 00 I am writing to express my great interest in applying 02 i 00 for this PhD vacancy in 00 *** 01 span 00 02 span 00 in *** Universiteit . 01 span 00 02 span 02 br
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00 I graduated from Faculty o***, 00 *** 00 in June 2006 and 01 span 00 I obtained a specialist degree 02 span 00 in ***. More narrow specialization is ***. During my studies (5 years) I got thorough knowledges in various objects and 01 i 00 I was always a curious and research-active student 02 i 00 . On the third year of education I have done my practical research work as a laboratory assistant in the ***, 00 , CITY 00 . 01 span 00 Working there I have adjoined for the first time with scientific investigations, have learnt to work in collective with highly qualified specialists that has helped me to discipline and organize my 02 span 00 01 span 00 work in future. 02 span 02 br
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00 Last two years of education I’m in detail studied my specialization in 00 *** Institute of ***, 00 CITY 00 . 00 Basic specialists of our Institute lecture us profile subjects like as: SOME SUBJECTS and many others. 00 02 br
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00 I was doing my diploma work in Group of *** in *** 00 Institute of ***, CITY 00 for 2 years. I completed and presented my graduation thesis on the theme “***”, were marked as “excellent”. 01 span 00 Working in lab I have gained not only major skills of practical job in the field of ***, have familiarized with many accessible physical research technique, have learnt self-supporting job, but also have gained appearance experience at various conferences, compilations of reports, writing an articles. 02 span 02 br
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00 I was looking for a PhD vacancy in 00 last autumn, but unfortunately for some domestic reasons I can't left and I had passed examinations to PhD position in my Institute. Last year 01 span 00 I worked on the following theme 02 span 00 "***" in the 00 Laboratory of *** 00 in the 00 *** Institute of *** 00 , CITY 00 . 00 01 span 00 I studied influence of various ionic liquids on homogeneous process of hydrocarbons oxidation. Investigated reactions were hydrocarbons oxidation in such aggressive solvent as acetic acid in the presence of palladium complexes. I had been considered a number of various ionic liquids (EMImBF 01 sub 00 4 02 sub 00 , BMImBF 01 sub 00 4 02 sub 00 , BMImOAc and EMImBr) with various substitutions to an imidazole ring and different anions. The greatest interest caused by the last one. It’s interesting to notice, that addition insignificant quantities of EMImBr sharply changed the direction of reaction and distribution of products. Gas chromatography, mass spectroscopy and NMR were used to analyze products distribution. The condition of palladium complexes in reaction mixture were studied by UV-vis spectroscopy. 02 span 02 br
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00 By getting to know more about 00 *** 00 , I understood that for several reasons this is the best place and opportunity for me. The theme of ionic liquids and their widely application in *** is very interesting to me, and I’d like to be engaged in it further. Unfortunately, there are no investigations on a large scale on this theme 00 00 in our Institute. This PhD position will give me a chance to work at higher level, with use of more perfect equipment that is enough difficult for me here, 01 b 00 02 b 00 to work with other people, experts in area of ***, to learn a lot of the new. Also it’s a great experience of 00 studying abroad 00 will help me to develop more highly my methodical abilities, practical and theoretical skills, 00 enrich my curriculum vitae, as well as gain more independence. 00 Having finished PhD position in the 00 *** 00 , it will give me more possibilities for the further career growth. It’s 00 the perfect opportunity for me to meet other cultures, learn another language and 00 traditions, connect with other interesting peoples, to get new friends. Having received this PhD vacancy we become a little territorially closer with my boyfriend, who’s occupies PhD position in a 00 , University ***. 02 br
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00 At last as a hard-working and responsible person I believe that I am a good candidate for this PhD project. 02 br
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00 Thank you very much for considering my application and I look forward to hearing from you in the near future regarding the success of my application. 02 br
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00 Yours sincerely 00 , 02 br
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I think you should leave the boyfriend part out.
- I think you should leave the boyfriend part out.
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hi dear tanya
i read 2 paragraph of your application. it was alittle long, and you put some unnecessery explanations in it. like" Working there I have adjoined for the first time with scientific investigations, have learnt to work in collective with highly qualified specialists that has helped me to discipline and organize my work in future."
i think you dont have t
i read 2 paragraph of your application. it was alittle long, and you put some unnecessery explanations in it. like" Working there I have adjoined for the first time with scientific investigations, have learnt to work in collective with highly qualified specialists that has helped me to discipline and organize my work in future."
i think you dont have t
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Over all was good but please try to be more abroad in starting then narrow down your research interest, it seems good.it seems good for attracting European researchers.
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ok it was somewhat good bt yoy have to tell ur interest in short and sweet manner
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