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Dobby Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivation letter for medicine Study in Sweden
Hi,
I'm a PhD student in Switzerland and want to study medicine in Sweden. Therefore I need to write a good motivation letter. As writing is not my cup of tea, I would need some help to correct it. Could you please take a look at it and tell me what do you think?
Thank you in advance
dobby
Here is the "first" draft of my letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is **** and with this letter I would like to introduce my candidature for the medicine study in your university.
I am a graduated student from the faculty of food sciences at the ****. During my study, I was tremendously interested in researches related to the human health. Hence, I decided to do a research on the intestinal microbiota as my dissertation thesis. I will finish my PhD in food biotechnology at **** in June of this year.
During my PhD thesis, I showed my abilities of fast learning, good adaptability to stress conditions and finding quick and reliable solutions to a large variety of problems. I also proved my capability to study in a foreign language since, as french speaker, I did all my studies in german. Personally, I am a person with a high perseverance level, someone who is motivated, enthusiast and ambitious. I am open-minded and interested to other cultures.
I hope to combine my experence and knowledge with my interest in medicine through gaining a degree in Medicine and eventually to be able to work in different countries around the world.
I enclose my CV for your considerations. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further details.
Yours faithfully
I'm a PhD student in Switzerland and want to study medicine in Sweden. Therefore I need to write a good motivation letter. As writing is not my cup of tea, I would need some help to correct it. Could you please take a look at it and tell me what do you think?
Thank you in advance
dobby
Here is the "first" draft of my letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is **** and with this letter I would like to introduce my candidature for the medicine study in your university.
I am a graduated student from the faculty of food sciences at the ****. During my study, I was tremendously interested in researches related to the human health. Hence, I decided to do a research on the intestinal microbiota as my dissertation thesis. I will finish my PhD in food biotechnology at **** in June of this year.
During my PhD thesis, I showed my abilities of fast learning, good adaptability to stress conditions and finding quick and reliable solutions to a large variety of problems. I also proved my capability to study in a foreign language since, as french speaker, I did all my studies in german. Personally, I am a person with a high perseverance level, someone who is motivated, enthusiast and ambitious. I am open-minded and interested to other cultures.
I hope to combine my experence and knowledge with my interest in medicine through gaining a degree in Medicine and eventually to be able to work in different countries around the world.
I enclose my CV for your considerations. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further details.
Yours faithfully
Top answer
Hi, I normally tell people to cut their letters down to size but I think you could do with expanding yours a little bit. Why have you decided to become a doctor? What sort of work do you want to do around the world?
- Hi, I normally tell people to cut their letters down to size but I think you could do with expanding yours a little bit.
- Why have you decided to become a doctor?
- What sort of work do you want to do around the world?
- Why do you want to study the course at their specific university?
- Why do you want to study in Sweden?
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Hi,
I normally tell people to cut their letters down to size but I think you could do with expanding yours a little bit. Why have you decided to become a doctor? What sort of work do you want to do around the world? Why do you want to study the course at their specific university? Why do you want to study in Sweden?
But what you have is a nice start. I've made a few corrections f
I normally tell people to cut their letters down to size but I think you could do with expanding yours a little bit. Why have you decided to become a doctor? What sort of work do you want to do around the world? Why do you want to study the course at their specific university? Why do you want to study in Sweden?
But what you have is a nice start. I've made a few corrections f
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