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DavoodI. Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Motivation Letter for Master's Degree

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00You know that how important the motivation letter is, so would you please help me and correct my letter, because English is not my first language.02br
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00Would you please answer this question either?02br
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01font00Is it better to sign the letter and also is the color of pen important02font00?02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam;02br
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00I would like to apply for the Master's Degree in *** at *** starting in August 2007. I am studying in my last semester (studying on my thesis) in Bachelor of Engineering in Industrial Engineering with specialization in System Analysis. I would like to continue my study in order to gain applied knowledge and experiences by academic research in your master’s program.02br
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00With increase need for flexibility of manufacturing systems, this tool is so beneficial for cost reduction. Besides I am so interested in optimization, improvement and development of manufacturing systems and processes. Therefore, when I was introduced to the *** as a tool for enhancing and analysing the real systems, I found my way and decided to dedicate myself to this field of study. Three factors fascinate me to this field; first the purpose of this tool is improvement and optimization, which I am keen on it. Second it is a field of study that really depends on computers and updated knowledge and softwares. Third it is new-born field of study that growing rapidly and I am confident that I can have a significant progress by studying in this master’s degree, besides propose new methods or approach in this field.02br
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00For satisfaction my need in ***, I have chosen this subject as my bachelor’s thesis (…(thesis title)). I, also, try to combine a new mathematical approach, ***, to the ***. I am sure that when I complete my thesis, this will be one of the best thesises in bachelor’s degree in my current university. Besides I have tried to learn and investigate in many *** softwares, like ***.02br
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00Real systems are usually big in size, so it is very time consuming to *** a real system, therefore a professional team should work on a project. As I like to cooperate with others, this is a good reason why I want to study in this master’s degree.02br
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00One of the most important aspect of this master’ degree in University *** is that the university has work integrated learning and studying is connected to the high technology industries, so that the university is well known for its intimate cooperation with local industries. Also, cooperation with *** University of Technology is admirable and makes this master’s program superb.02br
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00My future plan is to have an in-depth research on this field besides working with professional team in high technology companies as a system analyser to assess and improve the processes. As well, my ambition is continuing my studies in PhD degree, so that I can share my real experiences and applied knowledge to the students.02br
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00I have always tried to apply my theoretical knowledge in practice. This is why I took two internships during my university studies and why I have been a member of *** scientific foundation since 2003. This organization helps students to bring their theoretical knowledge to practice.02br
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00I have a flexible attitude and can work well with team or independent research, which is so vital for this master’s degree. Besides, this program is n international program, so that I will introduce with many cultures and variety of students that can be so exiting.02br
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00Furthermore, I am keen on manufacturing processes and experienced many of them, which is so helpful for this program. Also, statistics and probability are important aspects in this field, which I know them well.02br
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00I hope that I will have the opportunity to prove my abilities in the master’s program. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future regarding the success of my application. Should you require further information of any kind, please contact me by contact information below.02br
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00Yours faithfully,02br
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00Davood I.02br
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00***********02br
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00Iam waiting for youe Help, thanks in advance.0-
  

Top answer

0You should sign all letters. Black or blue ink are best as other colours will be seen as eccentric. 02br 02br 00Dear Sir or Madam;02br 02br 00I would like to apply for the Master's Degree in *** at *** starting in August 2007.

  • 0You should sign all letters.
  • Black or blue ink are best as other colours will be seen as eccentric.
  • 02br 02br 00Dear Sir or Madam;02br 02br 00I would like to apply for the Master's Degree in *** at *** starting in August 2007.
  • I am studying in my last semester (studying on my thesis) in Bachelor of Engineering in Industrial Engineering with specialization in System Analysis.
  • 02br 02br 00With 00increase00 need for flexibility of manufacturing systems, 00this tool00 is 00so00 beneficial for cost reduction.
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0You should sign all letters. Black or blue ink are best as other colours will be seen as eccentric. Problems highlighted for you.02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam;02br
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00I would like to apply for the Master's Degree in *** at *** starting in August 2007. I am studying in my last semester (studying on my thesis) in Bachelor of Engineering in Industrial E
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0Thanks a lot for your suggestions, I appreciate you. I edited my letter.02br
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01font00Is it OK now? Is it a good motivation letter or a windy one? Does it look like motivation letter?02font02br
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00I am waiting for your new suggestions.02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam;02br
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