Motivation letter for Master studies in finance

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00Before starting to write the letter, I have read quite a few comments and recommendations on this website. And they were really helpfull. I would really appreciate if you had a look at my version of motivation letter and gave some comments.02br
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00Thanks a lot guys,02br
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00Dalius02br
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00Dear Sir/Madam,02br
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00Possessing considerable theoretical background in economics and business administration and 3 years of work experience, I am more than interested in expanding my academic and professional horizons by applying for the Master of Science in Financial Economics degree at AAAA. I see this degree as an opportunity to bridge my current portfolio of skills and knowledge with my ambitious future career plans.02br
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00Already in my high school I had a childish dream to be a manager in The Finance World. Eventually, an abstract vision started taking shape. Honourable mention in International Physics Olympiads raised confidence in my analytical skills and led to decision to pursue a degree in economics. During the demanding studies at BBBB00 I saw my interest and energy strongly shifting towards the subjects having financial aspects in them. I started applying just acquired theoretical knowledge in real life situations – trading stocks, bonds, funds and currencies – which ultimately resulted in bachelor thesis on the topic “Testing the efficiency of Neural Networks optimization: application to Foreign Exchange”.02br
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00As for the “manager” side of the dream, besides my academic program I have also served as a catalyst for business development initiatives and as a coordinator of goal-driven teams. For example, I have provided outstanding leadership and teamwork performance for CCC Ltd, resulting in a fivefold increase in sales during 2.5 years; The “Guide to Life in BBBB” proved to be a 100 page thick example of my coordination and skills and the initiative is still continued by new generations at the university.02br
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00Combination of strong financial knowledge and business leadership skills can lead to extraordinary results, especially in today’s markets of the 00, where corporate finance is still in an early stage and opportunities for the qualified managers are vast. I feel like having acquired significant business leadership skills, however studies in AAAA would provide me with the lacking knowledge in finance and help me to pursue my career aims in corporate finance, where my education, my previous experience and most importantly my personal interests will combine.02br
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00How do I know that education in AAAA is exactly what I need? Graduates of your institution, Xperson and Yperson (they both also finished the same bachelor degree as me), gave me more insight about the subjects taught and quality of the studies. Having also seen how their careers progressed afterwards, I feel confident that Master of Science in Financial Economics is the right choice for me.02br
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00As nothing comes for free, in return for the perfect education I will get in BBBB I can assure to provide you with the top academic performance, remarkable analytical talents, natural interpersonal and communication abilities and irrepressible energy in everything I do.02br
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00Yours sincerely,02br
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00Dalius02br
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