Motivation letter for master biomedical science program

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From 1624 to 1662, during the Age of Discoveries, Taiwan was colonized by Holland. Dutch officials hired a lot of local people to alleviate the problem of lacking of labors. The commercial development of Taiwan was growing rapidly at that time. After that, Taiwan was occupied by China and Japan respectively, which made Taiwan immersed with multi-cultures and become what it looks like today. Thus, I think it is a nature of Taiwanese to explore and learned from foreign countries.
Netherlands is one of the most advanced countries and medical research is emphasized there. Also, This Biomedical Sciences Program is well-known for its Clinical Molecular Science and Maastricht University provides excellent students with the appealing scholarship. I believe that I am the right candidate for your university, for this program and the scholarship according to my previous studies, working experience and my character.
June, 2014 I graduated from Department of Biotechnology and Laboratory Science in Medicine in National Yang University, which is one of the best University in Taiwan. For the former two years, the courses focused on general sciences like Biochemistry, Molecular Biology and Physiology. In the third year, we started to access to clinical subject, Microbiology& Immunology, clinical biochemistry and hematology. Last year, I had the internship program in the Taipei Veteran General Hospital as a clinical medical laboratory scientist. It was a precious opportunity to experience clinical work and interact with patients and other medical professionals. I could apply myself to helping patients screen their diseases and assisting them to find the correct therapies - It is the goal that I keep reaching for and I think of it as my career.
To support myself through the university, I taught students English in a language school as a part-time job while I tried to balance my life with other activities as well. In the beginning, I was nervous to be in front of students but the more I tried, the more I know how to express myself to others and learned to cooperate with colleagues. Although, it was not an easy task to handle both studies and work at the same time, I’m sure I did become more independent. Moreover, in my spare time, I love playing volleyball and learning new languages. Our volleyball team won championship and third place in 2014 and 2013 respectively. On the court, it is a team-work and teammates need to cover each other. This spirit is extremely important no matter where we are and where we work. Then, I keep challenging myself to try new languages. Besides English and French, Russian would be my next target.
After graduation, I participated in a molecular biology research team in National Taiwan University Hospital, which is the biggest medical center in Taiwan. Since this research team is in the hospital, our destination is to improve the treatments for patients. This concept gives me and my colleagues a lot of inspiration. We used samples collected from patients to screen the gene regulation of certain diseases and undertook the drug assay into cancer cells to observe the effects. All we did is seek a breakthrough in clinical therapies. In my current work, I learned many fundamental laboratory skills and practice them every day. I hope to take advantage of what I learned into my upcoming research project and in my future career.
Maastricht University is a prestigious university and the master’s program and the scholarship must be competitive. While, my previous studies are correspond to the biomedical sciences program and I have relevant working experience. If I could finish so many tasks during the undergraduate school, I think I will do even better in the graduate school with the help of the scholarship. Let me strengthen your research performance.