Motivation letter for international program in business school: mistakes ?

Hi everybody,
I am applying to a business school and wanted to know if that letter fits and don’t have any errors.
Thank you very much
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My name
My adress and Email
Date
School’s name
School’s Adress

Dear Sir or Madam,
I wish to express my interest in your Master of Business and Management and more particularly, the International Business specialization. Companies and their operations in national and international markets have always fascinated me. That is why I am aiming for a profession in that direction.
In search of the right education and qualification for the career I wish to pursue, XX school appeared as one of the best places to study. I am interested, not just because of its excellent rankings, but also because of its international management program. I note that this program combines academic theory with important soft skills and meaningful knowledge concerning foreign cultures. In an international market that is driven by globalization, the importance of teaching exactly those additional skills has increased significantly in the last few years. You cannot do business globally without interacting with foreign cultures and for that you need to understand and speak many languages, and consider the world as your home.

Moreover, the International Business specialization meets the academic theory with practical experience by project assignments with corporate partners. But still one of the key facts about the International business specialization is the enrollment in the CEMS program through the mandatory semester abroad concluded with one of the CEMS partners.

I can show both theoretical and practical prerequisites for the master program. I am currently pursuing my Bachelor program in XX in France, and I will be following an exchange semester program in XX in Spain since mid February. In addition, I was able to acquire practical experience in marketing through my last internship xx Morocco. And I am a successful participant and junior project manager of my school’s Junior Consulting. Furthermore, my eagerness to perform well and my adaptability have been demonstrated in previous internships and summer jobs.

Everyday life at School XX would also benefit from that because a pleasant and multicultural climate not only facilitates, but also enhances teamwork.
As an alumnus of the International Business specialization and CEMS program, I would look forward to a career in a medium-sized to large company that operates in the global market. In that matter, I would benefit from XX school’s excellent reputation and find my place in the business world with greater speed and success.

Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your response and still available to convince you of my motivation during the assessments.

Yours faithfully,

My name.