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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Motivation letter for germany embassy

hi,
i have big problem with motivation letter , that's very hard for me, i write it one, but i'm not sure that is good letter or not ? some one can help me in this matter ?below is my letter, reading that , and please say me that what do u think about that, where is not correct , and where must be edited.
tnx.

Dear Madam or Sir,

I am writing to apply for a long-term student visa for Germany in order to complete my studies (Bachelor's degree) information technology at University of Braunschweig.

After I finished the first year at the School of Physical Therapy and the beginning of the summer vacation started working in computers store and then began exploring especially new things programming, my supervisor at work was began educate me some of the beginnings of programming languages such as (python, Ruby, C#, Java and C ++ ), I was impressed programming and everything related to them and decided to change my field to become related programming.

There are many universities where I am interested in studying, including the University of Braunschweig, which has high quality instructors and The programs are usually designed to prepare graduates to become inventors, and skilled in the field of information technology, or academic researchers continue to study new ways to use digital technology and to improve the technology in order to work better and more effectively.

I think I'm qualified to study in Germany because I studied in a foreign country and I know the difficulties facing the student who is not studying in is his own country, I am ready and very excited for the future, I will continue my studies for a master's degree with the master's degree I will be qualify to do the necessary research to add new things for this science

I humbly request you to consider my application and grant me a student visa to pursue my bachelor's degree in Germany.

Sincerely yours
  

Top answer

You have to explain how you will support yourself financially while studying in Germany, and how long you will stay in Germany, and where you will go after you finish your Master's degree. If you have already been accepted to study at the University of Braunschweig. Also, if you know the German language, say that, and if you are currently living and studying in Germany.

  • You have to explain how you will support yourself financially while studying in Germany, and how long you will stay in Germany, and where you will go after you finish your Master's degree.
  • If you have already been accepted to study at the University of Braunschweig.
  • Also, if you know the German language, say that, and if you are currently living and studying in Germany.
  • Dear Madam or Sir, I am writing to apply for a long-term (give a time, eg.
  • five years, unless "long-term" is the name of the visa) student visa to Germany in order to complete my studies (Bachelor's degree in information technology at the University of Braunschweig).
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You have to explain how you will support yourself financially while studying in Germany, and how long you will stay in Germany, and where you will go after you finish your Master's degree. If you have already been accepted to study at the University of Braunschweig.
Also, if you know the German language, say that, and if you are currently living and studying in Germany.

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thank you very much for your reply Emotion: heart

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