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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
motivation letter for European volunteer service.
Hello, I am writing a cover letter and I am not sure if the beggining is ok, or well written. Can I get some help with this? Thank you!!
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write to you to express my interest in participating as a volunteer at ***. I would be very honoured to be able to take part of a project that facilitates cultural development and exchange between ***. I am a recent graduate with a Masters in *** and the fact that the project promotes the acquisition of intercultural competence by taking part of the coordination and communication of *** activities makes this volunteer program a great opportunity to gain valuable practical experience on the field I would like to pursue a carrer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write to you to express my interest in participating as a volunteer at ***. I would be very honoured to be able to take part of a project that facilitates cultural development and exchange between ***. I am a recent graduate with a Masters in *** and the fact that the project promotes the acquisition of intercultural competence by taking part of the coordination and communication of *** activities makes this volunteer program a great opportunity to gain valuable practical experience on the field I would like to pursue a carrer.
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It is a good start, but too many words; always try to eliminate unnecessary ones when you revise. Pity the poor reader. Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in volunteering at ***.
- It is a good start, but too many words; always try to eliminate unnecessary ones when you revise.
- Pity the poor reader.
- Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in volunteering at ***.
- I would be very honoured to participate in a project that facilitates cultural development and exchange between ***.
- I am a recent graduate with a master's in ***, and because the project promotes intercultural competence through the coordination and communication of *** activities, this volunteer program is also a great opportunity for me to gain valuable practical experience in my career field.
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It is a good start, but too many words; always try to eliminate unnecessary ones when you revise. Pity the poor reader.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in volunteering at ***. I would be very honoured to participate in a project that facilitates cultural development and exchange between ***. I am a recent graduate with a master's in ***, and beca
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in volunteering at ***. I would be very honoured to participate in a project that facilitates cultural development and exchange between ***. I am a recent graduate with a master's in ***, and beca
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