Motivation letter for college

Hello there! I am writing a motivation letter to apply for college. I really could use your help because I know that I have some mistakes in this letter but have no one to check.

I really look forward to your help!

Thanks.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the Academic Program in Marketing Management atTietgenBusinessCollegestarting in the autumn of 2011. After graduating secondary school I look forward to continue study higher education inDenmark, therefore, I was searching for the right school and program. As a result I found this school as the most inspiring.

While studying in secondary school I understood that after graduating my goal is not only to get the best higher education but also to get bigger experience. That is why I decided to study abroad. As I do not want to move too far from home,Denmarkseems the right place for me. As much as I am interested in getting to know this countries culture and language I am also interested in being independent and checking myself if I am able to gain everything on my own.

I am certain that Academic Program in Marketing Management will develop my skills and knowledge in a level that I will be able to successfully compete in today’s labor market. I believe that this program will give me the basis from where I will be able to continue my higher education in much wider spectra. As for the study environment, I am looking forward to study in groups that gives a possibility to get to know everyone much closer. Also modern study environment and technique enables to achieve much more.

As for myself, I would say that I have great qualities that could lead me to a future leader. In nowadays the world changes so fast because of the innovative thinking people. I think that I have a great potential in this too. I would describe myself as a self-motivated, adventurous, purposeful and loyal person who would run the risk if it comes to reaching my goals.

Thank you for consideration. I look forward to your acceptance of my application.

Yours Sincerely,