Motivation letter for a university

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University told me write a letter between 250 to 500 words

Dear Sir/Madam,







Sub: - Requesting Admission







My name is ****** and I have done my High School and received Senior Secondary School Certificate from ****,*****. I would like to apply for an Undergraduate program in Mechanical Engineering at ******. I have a very good command of English language but require training in Dutch language to pursue.



I have always aspired to become an engineer to revolutionize the world with my knowledge. Today we take or use most of over everyday objects for granted which are in fact results of persistent efforts by engineers and scientists. My ambition is also to become part of this multicultural squad at ******. Knowing about engines was always my first preference whether in the form of aircraft, automobile, generators to petroleum machines and even toy cars. ****** is an excellent platform for Technical Studies. I have always been good at tending practicals but theory is something a bit hard to grasp, but, nevertheless, I managed it quite consistently.



Proposing to Study at ****** is a result of through evaluation of many universities and a few destinations. It was hard to select as there are lot of opportunities, but I found Netherlands among the best ones. The main reason for selecting Netherlands is a crave for uniqueness and something different while not shifting away from my main objective. Especially, when, there are only few options known to my community and still old notions are prevalent, for example UK, USA, Canada and Australia are considered epitome of good educational destinations in whole Middle East and South Asia, and in many other places too. Even I was victim of these notions until I just stumbled upon the fact that there are other great destinations too, that provide same standards with complete different perspective. I just want to shift from English speaking institutions to other languages while not compromising the quality of education and ***** is an excellent choice. It’ll be a great feeling to study my desired program in a completely different environment than I am used to, at the same time not compromising the quality of education. Accept for the weather and cost of living, everything I urged is found in Netherlands.



Studying at ****** will also help to encourage the concept of studying in the countries other than USA or UK in my community and it will give me an opportunity of break my boundaries of cultural understanding and open the way for other destinations for my community.



I hope I’ll be selected as a applicant for the year 2009/10 academic year. I also understand that my marks may not be sufficient or my degree may not be considered equivalent to Dutch diploma but I can assure you that I’ll prove a valuable student provided that I must be given a chance through entrance examination or other mode of testing.



I have carried an earnest effort to provide you with my full educational Details and all required documents. Even if, unintentionally, I forget to provide any documents or information, kindly contact me through the following addresses,

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Email: - ************ or ************ (I regularly check both of these Emails)

I hope to hear from you in near future. Thanks in advance for reading my letter.







With Regards,







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