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Guest Posted 22 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivation letter for a training
Within the framework of my formation, I must carry out a training course in laboratory, also I must do a motivation letter.
Is it good ?
Ct-Scr Nol
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E-mail: Email Removed
Phone home: (33) ***
25 November 2004
Dr Kim Hammond-Kosack
Rothamsted Research
Plant-Pathogen Interaction Division
Harpenden
Hertfordshire AL5 2QJ
Reference : your advertisement in Life Sciences World
Dear Mr Hammond-Kosach,
Your advertisement in “Life Sciences World” has caught my attention. Within the framework of my formation, I must carry out a training course in laboratory, also integer your team would be for me a real chance to conclude my draft studies and to have new experiences
As requested in your advertisement, I have a good knowledge of bioinformatic and fungal, plant and animal biology, in fact at the time of my formation I followed courses of informatic, biology and I learned how to use tools of bioinformatic. Moreover, my last experiments learned to me with working well in team.
You may contact me by phone at (33)***, or by post at my home address. I’d like the opportunity to demonstrate that I have the necessary qualities.
Sincerely Yours,
Nol Ct-Sr,
Encl.: Personal resume.
Is it good ?
Ct-Scr Nol
aaaaaaa
aaaaaaa
35 700 aaaaa
E-mail: Email Removed
Phone home: (33) ***
25 November 2004
Dr Kim Hammond-Kosack
Rothamsted Research
Plant-Pathogen Interaction Division
Harpenden
Hertfordshire AL5 2QJ
Reference : your advertisement in Life Sciences World
Dear Mr Hammond-Kosach,
Your advertisement in “Life Sciences World” has caught my attention. Within the framework of my formation, I must carry out a training course in laboratory, also integer your team would be for me a real chance to conclude my draft studies and to have new experiences
As requested in your advertisement, I have a good knowledge of bioinformatic and fungal, plant and animal biology, in fact at the time of my formation I followed courses of informatic, biology and I learned how to use tools of bioinformatic. Moreover, my last experiments learned to me with working well in team.
You may contact me by phone at (33)***, or by post at my home address. I’d like the opportunity to demonstrate that I have the necessary qualities.
Sincerely Yours,
Nol Ct-Sr,
Encl.: Personal resume.
Top answer
Quick points. I am not sure what you mean by your 'formation'. In the second paragraph you are just repeating a lot of the information twice.
- Quick points.
- I am not sure what you mean by your 'formation'.
- In the second paragraph you are just repeating a lot of the information twice.
- I think they will want a little more detail.
- Why should they select you over other candidates?
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Quick points.
I am not sure what you mean by your 'formation'.
In the second paragraph you are just repeating a lot of the information twice.
I think they will want a little more detail. Why should they select you over other candidates? Why do you want to study at that particular laboratory? What do you intend do do when you have finished your studies?
I am not sure what you mean by your 'formation'.
In the second paragraph you are just repeating a lot of the information twice.
I think they will want a little more detail. Why should they select you over other candidates? Why do you want to study at that particular laboratory? What do you intend do do when you have finished your studies?
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