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Ingmar83 Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivation letter! Emergency help!
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I hope you can help me correct my letter! The deadline is february 10th...
Letter of motivation for admission to Nanyang Technological University – Nanyang Business School, Singapore.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to express my interest for an admission to the third year of my BA in International Marketing and Management at Nanyang Technological University – Nanyang Business School, Singapore.
After studying two years of the Marketing Communications programme at BI Sandefjord, I needed to do something else. I spent two months backpacking in Southern Africa. I learned a lot about a totally different culture and met many interesting people. When I got back to Norway, I realised that I wanted to start studying International Marketing instead of Marketing Communications. I talked with a student counsellor who signed me up for some courses that I needed to complete the transfer. I am now more motivated than ever to finish my BA in International Marketing in Asia.
Nanyang Technological University (NTU) has established an international reputation and produces outstanding graduates. NTU has proven themselves worthy partners to two hundred different universities in thirty countries, included Norway. The close relationship with well-known global companies ensures that theoretical expertise is supported by real experience of culture-based communication and global market strategy analysis. A year at NTU will offer an academic experience and provide opportunities for self-development. It will be an exciting new phase of my life.
I’m looking forward to interacting with fellow students with different cultural backgrounds, which will contribute a better understanding of how to promote business in those cultures, since different cultural values require different marketing strategies. This I hope will help me respond effectively in an international business environment. I look forward to graduate from NTU with strong bonds to my fellow students and the international alumni network. I hope that my experiences at NTU will equip me to manage my future well and also prepare me to make significant contributions to the development of my country. To both get a Norwegian as well as an international diploma may be a positive thing when I apply for interesting jobs in my future international career.
Thank you for taking time to consider my application. I am looking forward to hearing your response.
Yours faithfully,
I hope you can help me correct my letter! The deadline is february 10th...
Letter of motivation for admission to Nanyang Technological University – Nanyang Business School, Singapore.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to express my interest for an admission to the third year of my BA in International Marketing and Management at Nanyang Technological University – Nanyang Business School, Singapore.
After studying two years of the Marketing Communications programme at BI Sandefjord, I needed to do something else. I spent two months backpacking in Southern Africa. I learned a lot about a totally different culture and met many interesting people. When I got back to Norway, I realised that I wanted to start studying International Marketing instead of Marketing Communications. I talked with a student counsellor who signed me up for some courses that I needed to complete the transfer. I am now more motivated than ever to finish my BA in International Marketing in Asia.
Nanyang Technological University (NTU) has established an international reputation and produces outstanding graduates. NTU has proven themselves worthy partners to two hundred different universities in thirty countries, included Norway. The close relationship with well-known global companies ensures that theoretical expertise is supported by real experience of culture-based communication and global market strategy analysis. A year at NTU will offer an academic experience and provide opportunities for self-development. It will be an exciting new phase of my life.
I’m looking forward to interacting with fellow students with different cultural backgrounds, which will contribute a better understanding of how to promote business in those cultures, since different cultural values require different marketing strategies. This I hope will help me respond effectively in an international business environment. I look forward to graduate from NTU with strong bonds to my fellow students and the international alumni network. I hope that my experiences at NTU will equip me to manage my future well and also prepare me to make significant contributions to the development of my country. To both get a Norwegian as well as an international diploma may be a positive thing when I apply for interesting jobs in my future international career.
Thank you for taking time to consider my application. I am looking forward to hearing your response.
Yours faithfully,
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Dear Sir/Madam, Why not... I am applying to the third year of my BA in International Marketing and Management at Nanyang Technological University – Nanyang Business School, Singapore. After studying two years of the Marketing Communications programme at BI Sandefjord, I needed to do something else.
- Dear Sir/Madam, Why not...
- I am applying to the third year of my BA in International Marketing and Management at Nanyang Technological University – Nanyang Business School, Singapore.
- After studying two years of the Marketing Communications programme at BI Sandefjord, I needed to do something else.
- ] I spent two months backpacking in Southern Africa.
- ] and met many interesting people.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
Why not...
I am applying to the third year of my BA in International Marketing and Management at Nanyang Technological University – Nanyang Business School, Singapore.
After studying two years of the Marketing Communications programme at BI Sandefjord, I needed to do something else. [oh, oh, why does he need to do something else????] I spent
Why not...
I am applying to the third year of my BA in International Marketing and Management at Nanyang Technological University – Nanyang Business School, Singapore.
After studying two years of the Marketing Communications programme at BI Sandefjord, I needed to do something else. [oh, oh, why does he need to do something else????] I spent
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I am applying to the third year of my BA in International Marketing and Management at Nanyang Technological University - Nanyang Business School, Singapore.
After studying two years of the Marketing Communications programme at BI Sandefjord, I spent two months backpacking in Southern Africa. I learned a lot about totally different cultures and met many interesting people. When I got bac
After studying two years of the Marketing Communications programme at BI Sandefjord, I spent two months backpacking in Southern Africa. I learned a lot about totally different cultures and met many interesting people. When I got bac
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Ingamar83,
You have my prior comments. They still apply.
I would also get rid of your informal "catch" stuff.
In reading your letter, I am left with the strong impression that this change in universities is merely a job hunting tool. I don't see any passion for Asia or even why you chose Asia. Last I checked Southern Africa was not in Asia. All in all, your let
You have my prior comments. They still apply.
I would also get rid of your informal "catch" stuff.
In reading your letter, I am left with the strong impression that this change in universities is merely a job hunting tool. I don't see any passion for Asia or even why you chose Asia. Last I checked Southern Africa was not in Asia. All in all, your let
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