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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivation Letter, Could you check this please?
Hello,
I wrote motivation letter. I dont know maybe there is something wrong. Could you check this letter please, and could you write me what is wrong?
Thank you
Dear Sirs,
I would like to take part in a summer professional practice in your Company - MTU Aero Engines Polska.
I am a third year student at the Faculty of Mechanical Engineering and Robotics. Learning at the Department comprehensively developed in me the theoretical knowledge from various fields. The program of these studies has specialized and interdisciplinary subjects. I am interested in designing machine parts in a CAD environment.
I am ambitious and responsible person. I am open to new challenges. I can work independently or in a team. I would like to take part in practice in your company because this is an excellent opportunity to improve my professional skills and to gain a lot of experiences. I hope that in future I will be able to continue to work with your company.
Sincerely,
Pawel
I wrote motivation letter. I dont know maybe there is something wrong. Could you check this letter please, and could you write me what is wrong?
Thank you
Dear Sirs,
I would like to take part in a summer professional practice in your Company - MTU Aero Engines Polska.
I am a third year student at the Faculty of Mechanical Engineering and Robotics. Learning at the Department comprehensively developed in me the theoretical knowledge from various fields. The program of these studies has specialized and interdisciplinary subjects. I am interested in designing machine parts in a CAD environment.
I am ambitious and responsible person. I am open to new challenges. I can work independently or in a team. I would like to take part in practice in your company because this is an excellent opportunity to improve my professional skills and to gain a lot of experiences. I hope that in future I will be able to continue to work with your company.
Sincerely,
Pawel
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Dear Sirs, I would like to take part in summer professional practice with MTU Aero Engines Polska. I am a third-year student in the Faculty of Mechanical Engineering and Robotics. Studying in this department has allowed me to acquire a comprehensive theoretical knowledge in several fields.
- Dear Sirs, I would like to take part in summer professional practice with MTU Aero Engines Polska.
- I am a third-year student in the Faculty of Mechanical Engineering and Robotics.
- Studying in this department has allowed me to acquire a comprehensive theoretical knowledge in several fields.
- My program has included both specialized and interdisciplinary subjects.
- I am particularly interested in designing machine parts in a CAD environment.
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Dear Sirs,
I would like to take part in summer professional practice with MTU Aero Engines Polska.
I am a third-year student in the Faculty of Mechanical Engineering and Robotics. Studying in this department has allowed me to acquire a comprehensive theoretical knowledge in several fields. My program has included both speci
I would like to take part in summer professional practice with MTU Aero Engines Polska.
I am a third-year student in the Faculty of Mechanical Engineering and Robotics. Studying in this department has allowed me to acquire a comprehensive theoretical knowledge in several fields. My program has included both speci
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