Motivation letter correction

Hello,

I'm having a hard time trying to correct this motivation letter.

Any help is most welcome.

To whom it may concern:

I am writing to you with regard to the internship position announced by ........................................................

Given that I want very much to work for an international organization, I believe that interning in UNITEE is the perfect opportunity to gain invaluable knowledge in the field of health and consumer policies and enriching experiences in a multinational working environment too.

Introducing myself, I am a young professional and a graduate of ............ University, with a solid academic and research record. During the previous year, I had the chance to intern in................................ As the main task of my job was the information gathering, I was mostly using the internal databases and the internet to conduct my research. My research objectives were mostly focusing on ............................................................ My tasks also included the attendance of conferences and meetings, along with the preparation of short reports on them. In addition, while studying I conducted various researches focusing on EU Decision-Making process and EU Law. Additional experience consists my work as coordinator assistant in ......................, a non governmental organization coordinating voluntary projects and youth exchanges around Europe. As my main tasks included the preparation of the project's funding applications, the update of the organization's website and the submission of previous projects' reports, I improved my administrative abilities and my communication skills too.

The above indicate that I have the educational, interpersonal and organizational skills required to be successful for that position.

On the top of that, because of my past experience and education I have developed personal leadership skills allowing me to interact with ethnic diverse persons and all age groups. Teamwork is another skill I have acquired and one I know is necessary for organizational cohesiveness. In addition, my facility in English, Italian and French, along with my experience of living and working abroad, enabled me to function effectively in a European setting.

I truly believe that this internship corresponds well with my future plans of seeking a career in an international, inter-governmental organization. Also, accepting challenges is the foundation of my life experiences and something I do with great confidence. Therefore, I would welcome the chance to be part of your team and put my knowledge, experience and enthusiasm into practice for your organization.

Thank you for your time and consideration of my application. I look forward to hearing from you soon .

Kind regards,