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Wendeus Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Motivation Letter - Chalmers University

ear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in applying for the master degree programme in Interaction Design in autumn 2011.
I have a bachelor degree in Industrial Design and a Specialization in Electronic Commerce. Taking this in consideration I think that I really match with the requirements of the programme and they can help me to get some good results as student. As a student I always have had a great performance and I am always ready to learn new things, specially those ones which represent a challenge for me. On the other hand, my work experience has been related with technology and design. I have been involved in many projects in which it is required the planning, design and development of interactive environments.
The reason for choosing this specific master programme comes from its great potential. I really believe that thanks to Interaction design people can socialize, communicate, learn, explore, achieve their targets and feel in a new, better and improve way than ever. That is really amazing and I want to be part of it. I have many ideas and I want to create interactive digital products that can fulfill these thoughts. Unfortunately until now I did not have the right knowledge and tools to putting them in practice and this is why I know this programme would be a perfect starting point for me. Plus, if I will get selected I would be learning from one of the best universities in Europe. Besides, I will have the opportunity to develop myself in an international environment giving to me the privilege to meet new people with different points of view that it would be very enriching experience for me.
I am very conscious about the level of dedication and perseverance required to achieve the best result. I truly believe that I can reach this master degree giving the best performance. My background and experience can give me the necessary to qualify for this master programme.
I hope will you consider my application and you can view me as a favorable candidate for this programme. I will be waiting patiently,
With respect,
My NAME
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Could you help me to check this motivation letter? I really appreciate your help!
  

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Hi wendeus Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in applying for the master 's degree programme in Interaction Design in starting in the autumn 2011 semester . I have a bachelor 's degree in Industrial Design with and a s pecialization in Electronic Commerce. Taking this in consideration , I think that I really match with the requirements of the programme and they can help me to get some good results as student.

  • Hi wendeus Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in applying for the master 's degree programme in Interaction Design in starting in the autumn 2011 semester .
  • I have a bachelor 's degree in Industrial Design with and a s pecialization in Electronic Commerce.
  • Taking this in consideration , I think that I really match with the requirements of the programme and they can help me to get some good results as student.
  • As a student , I always have had a great performance and I am always ready to learn new things, specially those ones which represent a challenge for me.
  • On the other hand, my work experience has been related to with technology and design.
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Hi wendeus

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in applying for the master's degree programme in Interaction Design in starting in the autumn 2011 semester. I have a bachelor's degree in Industrial Design with and a specialization in Electronic Commerce. Taking this in consideration, I think tha
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AlpheccaStars, is it correct to use "especially" instead of "specially" in this sentence "as a student, I always have had a great performance and I am always ready to learn new things, specially those ones which represent a challenge for me"?
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Hi AlpheccaStars,
I really appreciate your help...it is very useful......I've fixed the letter as you suggest and I add some new information. could you help me one more time with it?.....thank you so much!

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Dear Sir or Madam,
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Hi wendeus
I've made some alternate phrasing suggestions and questions in italics.

--Dear Sir or Madam,
I am
writing to express my interest in applying for the master’s degree
programme in Interaction Design starting in the autumn 2011 semester. I have a bachelor's degree in Industrial Design and a specialization in Electronic Commerce.
Taking this in consideration,

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