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Saikano Posted 18 years ago
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Motivation letter can u please check?
Hello! Can u please check my motivation letter?
Thank you!!!
Throughout my secondary education , I have been mostly interested in Mathematics and Economy. My dream was to be able to study in UK in order to get the best education in Economics and Finance,because I want to gain knowledge of these subjects and implement this knowledge in my future life and hopefully successful career.
Since when I was 14 I have begun learning and studying Economy,finance,management and many other diverse subjects. As I was not able to learn this at school I tried to find this information in the Internet and I managed to learn lots of interesting things,for example – I have found a video seminar about investments and money. That was really cognitive and I realized that I want to learn more. So I began purchasing different books, while the others I was able to find In my local library. I have watched tons of video seminars about forex – foreign exchange of different currencies. The book that has done the biggest influince on my life was the book of Robert Kyosaki(a famous investor and bussinesman)-“Rich dad,poor dad”. He taught people that all their financial problems come from their lack financial literacy. And that in order to become rich you have to be gain financial knowledge and I fully agree with him and I am determined to get the best education in economy and fnance.
Except for my interest in finance and economy I have been involved in many diverse activities.On of them is debates.I joined the club when I was in 8th form and now I am very proud that I have become the president of our debate club and I also have built our clubs internet site in order to promote debates in our city and school. I have participated in many debates and tournaments and I have become first runner winner of regional debate tournament in 2008. Also I received an award from our debate society and I was able to go on holiday voyage to Brusel in Europarlament.
Moreover I was really succesfull in sports – I have reached the last student degree in karate and now I am planning to get the master degree. I trained since I was 8 years old and lately I was given a group of children to teach them karate in which I succeeded and I have become a beloved trainer.
I believe that I am determined , charismatic and active student . And what I want most of all is to gain knowledge about economy and finace in order to be able to achieve my future goals . And I believe that your university can give me this chance to study.
Thanks!
Thank you!!!
Throughout my secondary education , I have been mostly interested in Mathematics and Economy. My dream was to be able to study in UK in order to get the best education in Economics and Finance,because I want to gain knowledge of these subjects and implement this knowledge in my future life and hopefully successful career.
Since when I was 14 I have begun learning and studying Economy,finance,management and many other diverse subjects. As I was not able to learn this at school I tried to find this information in the Internet and I managed to learn lots of interesting things,for example – I have found a video seminar about investments and money. That was really cognitive and I realized that I want to learn more. So I began purchasing different books, while the others I was able to find In my local library. I have watched tons of video seminars about forex – foreign exchange of different currencies. The book that has done the biggest influince on my life was the book of Robert Kyosaki(a famous investor and bussinesman)-“Rich dad,poor dad”. He taught people that all their financial problems come from their lack financial literacy. And that in order to become rich you have to be gain financial knowledge and I fully agree with him and I am determined to get the best education in economy and fnance.
Except for my interest in finance and economy I have been involved in many diverse activities.On of them is debates.I joined the club when I was in 8th form and now I am very proud that I have become the president of our debate club and I also have built our clubs internet site in order to promote debates in our city and school. I have participated in many debates and tournaments and I have become first runner winner of regional debate tournament in 2008. Also I received an award from our debate society and I was able to go on holiday voyage to Brusel in Europarlament.
Moreover I was really succesfull in sports – I have reached the last student degree in karate and now I am planning to get the master degree. I trained since I was 8 years old and lately I was given a group of children to teach them karate in which I succeeded and I have become a beloved trainer.
I believe that I am determined , charismatic and active student . And what I want most of all is to gain knowledge about economy and finace in order to be able to achieve my future goals . And I believe that your university can give me this chance to study.
Thanks!
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ALright, you're using totally inapropriate language. I mean WHAT you write is fine, but you have to represent the facts in more sophisticated way. com/personalstatements / and read the worst and best pieces.
- ALright, you're using totally inapropriate language.
- I mean WHAT you write is fine, but you have to represent the facts in more sophisticated way.
- com/personalstatements / and read the worst and best pieces.
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ALright, you're using totally inapropriate language. I mean WHAT you write is fine, but you have to represent the facts in more sophisticated way. Check out some really good personal statements on economy and finance: Go on http://www.studential.com/persona
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