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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Motivation Letter, a little help would be greatly appreciated

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00I am applying to a LLM programm in European Law and I need to provide a short motivation letter (about 100 words). Due to the fact that it is quite short and that I am a non-native english speaker (Swiss), I'd like to ask some help to correct it. Thank you very much for your precious help !02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam, 02br
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00As my mother grew up in Vietnam, and then lived in Lebanon, I received a rather opened education, which tought me to like the diffrence, and lead me to orient my interests toward the international sphere. Having had the opportunity to follow a former diplomat courses during High School, I soon became convinced that my vocation was to work in the international field. Now that international current affairs show European construction benefiting from a new impetus, I think that my country, through its particolar geopolitical position, will always need more foreign officers specialized in community law. 02br
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00Owing the quality of your program, the legal tradition of the Nederlands in International Law and the presence of numerous international organizations nearby, I am strongly convinced that your LLM program constitutes the ideal means to deepen my knowledge from this perspective.02br
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1font 00Don't you already have to have a law degree to get an LLM? If so, shouldn't you mention that? Don't start with your mother, start with YOU.

  • 1font 00Don't you already have to have a law degree to get an LLM?
  • If so, shouldn't you mention that?
  • Don't start with your mother, start with YOU.
  • I want to pursue an LLM in European law for a number of reasons.
  • I have grown up with an international perspective...
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1font00Don't you already have to have a law degree to get an LLM? If so, shouldn't you mention that? Don't start with your mother, start with YOU. I want to pursue an LLM in European law for a number of reasons. I have grown up with an international perspective... [more]. Additionally,... [more]. I know that your institution is the right one for me because... 02font

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