Motivation letter

Can someone please correct this motivation letter for sustainable energy master degree ?

Dear Committee,

I am writing to express my interest in applying for a Master Degree in Sustainable Energy at the university of ….. I have graduated last year as an Energy engineer from the …

I choose this particular master in Sustainable Energy at …. for its wide range material subjects and its advanced scientific methods in thermal and energy fields which will console my understanding in this area of study. Besides, the topics covered in this program offers a firm grounding in analytical and experimental essentials of sustainable Energy as well as addressing the societal and economic aspects of innovations in energy technology. Finally, this master fits my future career prospects: working on engineering projects as a technical consultant in the energy sector.

My educational background in Energy Engineering …. Introduced me to various courses in the Solar Energy, Wind Energy, Energy efficiency, Energy building which enabled me to acquire relevant knowledge and skills in the Energy industry. Therefore, I believe a master degree program in Sustainable Energy would offer me the opportunity to broaden my knowledge academically.

As an undergraduate student, I did an internship at …., a company operating in the renewable energy sector. This experience reinforced my interest in sustainable energy where I developed a great understanding in the design, implementation and maintenance of electrical and solar panels. Besides, I have also been involved in the process of field surveys, testing activities, using software modeling tools and engineering analysis which has helped me in acquiring significant knowledge pertaining to the design and supervision of the manufacturing and installation of solar energy systems and their components.

My end-of-studies internship at … focused more on energy savings and efficiency where I carried out site inspections and energy surveys related to lighting and analyzing the quality ,efficiency and cost-effective of the established lighting energy system which resulted in identifying an upgrade system to boost the energy performance and conducting a comprehensive technical-economic feasibility studies .

The top-quality education standards in technical area , the international profile and the extremely distinguished faculty members and research facilities are the factors which have motivated me to apply for a master degree at the at the University of …

Based on my academic knowledge and experience, I believe that I have the capability, and qualification to secure admission to pursue post-graduate studies at university of … I am confident to match the high standards demanded in this master’s program.

I am waiting for your kind and positive response. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely,