Motivation letter

I want to sent my motivation letter in arts ... to french scholarship... and I wrote this .. what do u think about it?

My name is xxxxxxxx and I am applying for a master’s degree. Throughout my course in university, I maintained a high level of academic achievements while doing community volunteering in xxx. I graduated from the second faculty of fine arts in Damascus University, majoring in visual communications on July 2016.

Not only was I involved with academic and extra-curricular activities, I also worked as a freelancer since 2014 and I worked one month training in xxxxxxxxxxx in Damascus as a junior graphic designer. On august 2016 I started working in xxxxxxxxxxxxas a graphic designer as of today. On November, I was nominated as employee of the month for creative and hard working. This employment has taught me much about others and myself. I have learned what it means to work hard and how to motivate other to do the same thing.

At Damascus University, I was honored to be one of the top ten students from seventy applicants whom entered the honors program. In addition, I was awarded the Al-Bassel certificate for academic excellence.

Behind my achievements is a strong desire to learn. I hope to complete my master’s degree over the next year and attend graduate school so one day I can return the favor to the many professors that helped me along the way during university. Philosophy has taught me to evaluate life and experience, it’s through that I hope to become an active member in society, using all my energy to bring about constructive change and create a path to the “good life,” not only for myself but also for others.

I would like to thank you in advance for considering my application.

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