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Mohamed Mahmoud Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivation letter
Hello Everyone,
i would like to post my motivation letter to help me with grammar and improve or suggest any ideas if you wanna.===
Date: 27/01/2016
Dear Sir/Madam,
Good Day.
The educational systems in Middle East in general is not good enough to discover your talent as a student, So it's easy to note millions of youth who works in a field completely different about their graduation. I graduated from faculty of commerce Zagazig University in 2009, but because I believe in this idiom "Be what you ought to be and not what you ought not to be" So, I decided to work in information technology field which I was really Passionate about it.
I worked in Egypt in Sharm El-Sheikh City as IT specialist and I had been promoted quickly during one year to be IT Supervisor, then I started to study one of the most important certifications of Microsoft "MCSE: Microsoft Certified System Engineer" to develop my skills and to get better opportunity. And it happened at the middle of 2011 when I got chance to be System Administrator in "Azimuth Firm" and after year and half I decided to improve my income by moving to a gulf county. And I came to Saudi Arabia at begin of 2013 to work with a Canadian company "Canadian-ITS" as System Engineer. Canadian-ITS given to me chance to improve my skills again by many training in a different technologies and I didn't lose this chance, in three years I become certified from the most famous international companies like " HP, Cisco and Microsoft" in plus another "SMB Companies like VEEAM, GFI and etc." And my communication skills, good business relation with the customers in plus my technical experience pushed the managers in my firm to involve me more in Sales meetings with the customers and vendors and my role has been expanded gradually to include selecting new engineers and evaluate them till my role became semi managerial and technically at the same time.
And now I would like to take the next step by improving my management and business skills with a professional way by Studying MBA because I believe the investment in your skills is the best investment you can ever do. Studying MBA will not improve my managerial skills and business development skills only, also will improve my position and it will reflect on my income especially if I come back to work in gulf country and will enhance my life style too. In fact the options to continue in UK if I find good opportunity or check my chance in immigration to Canada are still available but I think the choice will be based on the offers and comparison between the benefit of money and the benefit of life style. But in all cases I’m planning to prepare PhD even if I’m not planning to get it direct after MBA due finance issue, so I’m going to wait at least two years between MBA and PhD.
I was much eager to select Inveterate University with good ranking to prepare a strong MBA and to be qualified to new challenge in my life, also the British education in general and Birmingham in special are a dream for any student in the world and I believe my qualification and your needs would be an excellent fit and also I considered in my choice the cost of life in the city that is not too much expensive like London and in addition I’ll do my best to have a training in a big companies during my studies to qualifying me to the market.
Please do revert for any sort of clarifications.
Sincerely,
Mohamed El Sayed
E-mail:
Tel:
i would like to post my motivation letter to help me with grammar and improve or suggest any ideas if you wanna.===
Date: 27/01/2016
Dear Sir/Madam,
Good Day.
The educational systems in Middle East in general is not good enough to discover your talent as a student, So it's easy to note millions of youth who works in a field completely different about their graduation. I graduated from faculty of commerce Zagazig University in 2009, but because I believe in this idiom "Be what you ought to be and not what you ought not to be" So, I decided to work in information technology field which I was really Passionate about it.
I worked in Egypt in Sharm El-Sheikh City as IT specialist and I had been promoted quickly during one year to be IT Supervisor, then I started to study one of the most important certifications of Microsoft "MCSE: Microsoft Certified System Engineer" to develop my skills and to get better opportunity. And it happened at the middle of 2011 when I got chance to be System Administrator in "Azimuth Firm" and after year and half I decided to improve my income by moving to a gulf county. And I came to Saudi Arabia at begin of 2013 to work with a Canadian company "Canadian-ITS" as System Engineer. Canadian-ITS given to me chance to improve my skills again by many training in a different technologies and I didn't lose this chance, in three years I become certified from the most famous international companies like " HP, Cisco and Microsoft" in plus another "SMB Companies like VEEAM, GFI and etc." And my communication skills, good business relation with the customers in plus my technical experience pushed the managers in my firm to involve me more in Sales meetings with the customers and vendors and my role has been expanded gradually to include selecting new engineers and evaluate them till my role became semi managerial and technically at the same time.
And now I would like to take the next step by improving my management and business skills with a professional way by Studying MBA because I believe the investment in your skills is the best investment you can ever do. Studying MBA will not improve my managerial skills and business development skills only, also will improve my position and it will reflect on my income especially if I come back to work in gulf country and will enhance my life style too. In fact the options to continue in UK if I find good opportunity or check my chance in immigration to Canada are still available but I think the choice will be based on the offers and comparison between the benefit of money and the benefit of life style. But in all cases I’m planning to prepare PhD even if I’m not planning to get it direct after MBA due finance issue, so I’m going to wait at least two years between MBA and PhD.
I was much eager to select Inveterate University with good ranking to prepare a strong MBA and to be qualified to new challenge in my life, also the British education in general and Birmingham in special are a dream for any student in the world and I believe my qualification and your needs would be an excellent fit and also I considered in my choice the cost of life in the city that is not too much expensive like London and in addition I’ll do my best to have a training in a big companies during my studies to qualifying me to the market.
Please do revert for any sort of clarifications.
Sincerely,
Mohamed El Sayed
E-mail:
Tel:
Top answer
Dear Sir/Madam, Good Day. The educational systems in Middle East in general is not good enough to discover your talent as a student, So it's easy to note millions of youth who works in a field completely different about their graduation. I graduated from the F aculty of C ommerce at Zagazig University in 2009, but because of my interest in computers, I believe in this idiom "Be what you ought to be and not what you ought not to be" So, I decided to work in information technology field which I 've always been was really p assionate abou t.
- Dear Sir/Madam, Good Day.
- The educational systems in Middle East in general is not good enough to discover your talent as a student, So it's easy to note millions of youth who works in a field completely different about their graduation.
- I graduated from the F aculty of C ommerce at Zagazig University in 2009, but because of my interest in computers, I believe in this idiom "Be what you ought to be and not what you ought not to be" So, I decided to work in information technology field which I 've always been was really p assionate abou t.
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- I worked in Egyp t, in Sharm El-Sheikh Cit y, as IT specialist and I had been got promoted quickly during within one year to be IT Superviso r.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
Good Day.
The educational systems in Middle East in general is not good enough to discover your talent as a student, So it's easy to note millions of youth who works in a field completely different about their graduation. I graduated from the Faculty of Commerce at Zagazig University in 2009, but because of my interest
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