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Saqlain Ibrar Posted 10 years ago
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Motivation letter

need some suggestions on motivation letter for scholarship for MS fire safety Engineering.
(why do you want to register for this program?)

LETTER OF MOTIVATION
I am writing to apply for the 'International Master of Science in Fire Safety Engineering' (IMFSE). I am confident that this is an excellent program which best meets my goals and aspirations for furthering my education.

After studying Chemical Engineering as undergraduate course for 4 years at XYZ , now I have been working as Health Safety & Environment (HSE) Officer at XYZ for 8 months, carrying out day to day operations of HSE department and contributing to the application of effective HSE management by providing technical support. As this is start of my professional career and I found HSE as growth oriented and very challenging career opportunity, integrating and optimizing systems for efficient operations ensuring no harm to personnel, material and environment. As fire safety is the major domain under HSE, and relatively more related to my undergraduate major engineering subjects i.e fuels and combustion, chemical reaction engineering, heat transfer, thermodynamics, mass transfer, transport phenomena, applied chemistry etc, I am sure that a postgraduate degree in fire safety engineering would be a valuable asset for me. I have developed very sound understanding and showed excellent academic performance in these subjects.

My working on undergraduate final year project “Process Design for Production of Gasoline by Platforming of Naphtha” also included Hazard & Operability Study (HAZOP), systematically examining the proposed process for identification and prevention of hazards. This project was my first foray into research work, which was a great experience and it improved my research capability and design study knowledge.

Besides of my interest and academic & professional suitability for this program, I want to mention some appealing statistics. Fire incidents kill around 16,500 people and leave 164,000 injured or disabled every year in Pakistan. For example, a very shocking fire in a garment factory in Baldia town in 2012 killed more than 250 people. This happened due to the negligence of the management, non-availability of fire safety equipment, insufficient exits & ventilation and lack of proper staff training. These are the most common reasons behind most fire incidents in Pakistan. Thus, your postgraduate program in this vital area, which is often neglected in developing countries like Pakistan, is a valued one.

I am determined to make most out of this program. By availing this excellent opportunity, my aim is to become an FSE expert in an international framework. I believe that being a student in your institution would not only empower my career development, but would give me the framework to utilize my full potentials and I would benefit from the numerous challenging career opportunities.


Sincerely,

ABC
  

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LETTER OF MOTIVATION I am writing to apply for the (program / course) 'International Master of Science in Fire Safety Engineering' (IMFSE). I am confident that this is an excellent program which best meets my goals and aspirations for furthering my education. ) , now I have been working as a Health Safety & Environment (HSE) Officer at XYZ for 8 months, carrying out day-to-day operations of the HSE department and contributing to the application of effective HSE management by providing technical support.

  • LETTER OF MOTIVATION I am writing to apply for the (program / course) 'International Master of Science in Fire Safety Engineering' (IMFSE).
  • I am confident that this is an excellent program which best meets my goals and aspirations for furthering my education.
  • ) , now I have been working as a Health Safety & Environment (HSE) Officer at XYZ for 8 months, carrying out day-to-day operations of the HSE department and contributing to the application of effective HSE management by providing technical support.
  • ) and very challenging career opportunity, integrating and optimizing systems for efficient operations while / and ensuring no harm to personnel, material and environment.
  • As fire safety is a major domain under HSE, and relatively more related to my undergraduate major engineering subjects such as fuels and combustion, chemical reaction engineering, heat transfer, thermodynamics, mass transfer, transport phenomena, and applied chemistry etc , I am sure that a postgraduate degree in fire safety engineering would be a valuable asset for me.
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LETTER OF MOTIVATION
I am writing to apply for the (program / course) 'International Master of Science in Fire Safety Engineering' (IMFSE). I am confident that this is an excellent program which best meets my goals and aspirations for furthering my education.

After studying Chemical Engineering as an undergraduate course for 4 years at XYZ (This implies that you

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