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Alemana Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivation letter
Hello to everyone,
could someone please check the following sentences for me?
Thank you so much!
"Working in the emerging market Mexico, increased both my passion for Latin America and my interest in XXX topics, and convinced me to develop a career in the combination of the two.
The success of XXX’s in Latin America is a result of your high-level of service orientation, which I would like to contribute to as XXX."
"The XXX Program convinces me because it would allow me to gain a broad overview of XXX’s activities by gaining also additional experience in a related area." - How could I replace "to gain"? Is it possible to say "by obtaining additional experience"?
could someone please check the following sentences for me?
Thank you so much!
"Working in the emerging market Mexico, increased both my passion for Latin America and my interest in XXX topics, and convinced me to develop a career in the combination of the two.
The success of XXX’s in Latin America is a result of your high-level of service orientation, which I would like to contribute to as XXX."
"The XXX Program convinces me because it would allow me to gain a broad overview of XXX’s activities by gaining also additional experience in a related area." - How could I replace "to gain"? Is it possible to say "by obtaining additional experience"?
Top answer
Alemana "Working in the emerging market of Mexic o increased both my passion for Latin America and my interest in *** topic s and convinced me to develop pursue a career combining both. in the combination of the two. " Alemana "The *** Program convinces is right for me because it would allow me to gain a broad overview of ***’s activities by gaining also as well as valuable additional experience in a related area.
- Alemana "Working in the emerging market of Mexic o increased both my passion for Latin America and my interest in *** topic s and convinced me to develop pursue a career combining both.
- in the combination of the two.
- " Alemana "The *** Program convinces is right for me because it would allow me to gain a broad overview of ***’s activities by gaining also as well as valuable additional experience in a related area.
- Consider changing "in a related area" to "in an area related to my research/career/specialization ...
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Alemana"Working in the emerging market of Mexico increased both my passion for Latin America and my interest in *** topics and convinced me todeveloppursue a career combining both.in the combination of the two.
AlemanaThe success of XXXs in Latin America is a result of
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Thank you very much for your help.
Sorry for bothering you, but I have one more question. Could I say instead of "is right for me" - "is appealing to me"?
With this sentence I actually wanted to say something different. This program is appealing because I will get to know better the whole organization because I would also work for some months in a related department/area.
Sorry for bothering you, but I have one more question. Could I say instead of "is right for me" - "is appealing to me"?
With this sentence I actually wanted to say something different. This program is appealing because I will get to know better the whole organization because I would also work for some months in a related department/area.
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AlemanaThank you very much for your help.You're welcome.
AlemanaSorry
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