Motivation Letter

Dear Masters,
Can you please review my motivation letter? Please feel free to cut lines of paragraphs that you might think that don't apply.

When I learned about this position I didn’t think twice. The thought of a studentship at "X" seemed like a unique opportunity to me, which would have a great impact on my life and my goals.
As I have nearly finished my studies, my next big step is applying for an MSc. However, in order to make an efficient choice of the degree, I firstly want to have working experience on this sector. In this way, I am going to spot which aspect of learning I like the most and want to deepen.
The field of studies that I have chosen opens up to a very competitive labor market. A working experience at "X" would be a milestone at my future career and would give me great chances of a better job opportunity.
Human Recourse Manager, Organizational Psychology and Marketing are heavily connected to the human factor, as the core of their operations. I believe that you get the most out of them, when you work in an environment where you cooperate with people of different cultures and ideas, who might have a completely different perspective of viewing things and handling situations. It can contribute to really expand your horizons and understand phenomena that you wouldn’t be able to do if working with people of the same culture. Furthermore, "X" provides students with a friendly working environment and makes them feel a member of a big family, something that maximizes their creativity and productivity, which are important elements of sciences like H/R and Marketing.